Reviews for Broken Promise |
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creativesm75 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011 nice |
br0flove chapter 1 . 1/8/2010 Beautiful. |
Shail666 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009 Wow, I really liked this. Not only did you include a back story which was quite touching, you also created a present time dilemma which was quite moving. Nice job, very in-character and well-written. :D Nice! |
lazeee an demented chapter 1 . 12/2/2008 Hmm, i reviewed this morning..meh i'll do it aagain *loves you that much* Skyfire/starscream is one of my favourite pairings and you wrote it wonderfully. The flash backs were integrated masterfully. Hope you write another soon. |
Kookaburra chapter 1 . 12/2/2008 Oh! Very sad, and well-written! Normally I can't stand "flashbacks" in fics, but you managed to fit it smoothly into the story's flow. Well done! |
dolose chapter 1 . 12/1/2008 Hm. I'm no good at these reviews, but I wanted to say I enjoyed the fic. It's haunting and I'm really not a Starscream fangirl, but I really feel for him here. |
story reader chapter 1 . 12/1/2008 I had to reread this as I couldn't figure out at first what promise he broke, but then I did find it. But even if he said he wouldn't go back, just before that he said he wouldn't as long as Skyfire was still there. Once Skyfire was killed by Megatron, that promise was negated, so one could say that he didn't break his promise as Megatron's actions cancelled it out. If Megatron hadn't showed up and killed Skyfire while trying to get Starscream, he probably would have stayed away from the Decepticons. Now, Starscream has a reason to go after Megatron. Sad little story and nicely done. |