Pretty good sum up. Could have just placed it all at the beginning of the sequel though since it seems like there is a storm ahead.

-D101

I really didn't expect a pre-epilogue...It's been a while since we've talked...

This story was a really good story i loved the endingg

If I log in I can't review but I just felt like rereading the story. Felt you should know.

-d101

I read 2 sentences of your story. and its horrible.

your grammar is so off. I have no idea what you're trying to say. It made my eyes bleed when I saw just how horrible it was.

im sure you have a good story line otherwise you wouldnt have had so many reviewers and chapters.

but seriously the next time you write a story, please... if there is a period, make sure that it starts with an Upper case letter; if there is a comma, make sure the next word is SPACED. and it REALLY REALLY REALLY doesn't hurt to read over the story CAREFULLY once to make sure that you didnt forget any words.

I hope that this harsh critiscm will help you become a better writer and not want to give up on writing.

aim for your goal.

shoot for the top.

edit your work

lol i haven't read the whole cahpter yet but ijust had to send this, my first name is shea lol you prolly don't care but i had to say it. Other than that, what i have read so far is really good.

Nicely done Shea! I'm amused that Mikiku and Shea are roughly the same age. Creepy huh? Anyways, nicely done getting Kurama into the water fight too. I can't wait for Rebellion. Please let me know when it is out. See ya!

-D101

Aah! It's over! It was a good run. And don't feel bad about the ending! You kept it with the series, even Botan's random inserts. Good job!

Hello,

This story sadlly to say is very hard to read you start one thought and move on to another in the middle of one thought and personally I have to make asumptions about the story you are supposed to be telling and also as a small side note full gramar is also important. But other than that I like your plot so far but again alittle hard to read.

Aww, poor Azami. Hiei better start showing concern while she's conscious!

And the last chapter is coming! I can't wait to see what happens! See you there!

Too bad that Azami lost but Hiei totally proved himself wrong so everything is awesome! Awesome job! Please update soon!

-D101

Nicely done! I hope the marriage goes well. Awesome job! Please update soon!

-D101

Aw, Kurama is so sweet! Yay, gentleman! Always getting rid of all the fears and worries! Gotta love 'im!

Keep up the good work! I'm sad it's the end, but I can't wait for the resolution.

Until next time!

That was a fun fight. Keep it up!

Aw, I guess the end is coming up soon, huh? I'm sure it will be awesome! See you next time!

Jerk, getting me all excited. Okay then. Best of luck with the planning

-D101