Awesome story so far! Please keep updating.

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Since no one has given you a review I thought I would.

Story as a whole: Its fantastic. I like Beryls personality especially. She seems a lot more complex than in the anime. I like the interaction between the Dark Kingdom and the Decepticons, they seem to have a good working relationship. The connection between Shockwave and mettallia intrigues me. Oh and yes Shockwave would be badass with telekinesis.

The relationship between the Senshi and Autobots is strained at best. I feel really bad for Ami for both the Starscream crisis and the kidnapping. This is an awesome story keep up the good work.

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Whoo boy! We're gonna see some flyin' fecal matter now. After all the trashing that Ami got from the others in her difficult, (if misguided) decision to get help from Starscream, when she needs help from them they are too busy getting drunk, or sleeping away the night, or just not caring. If Beryl and Megatron are smart, they will find a way to exploit that. I'm pretty sure Starscream will. He isn't called 'The Master Manipulator' for nothing. Indeed, he seems to be the one who advised Queen Beryl to bring 'OceanPearl271' in unharmed.

The sad irony of this story is how the decepticons get along better with the NegaVerse than the Autobots get along with The Senshi. The Senshi don't even seem to get along with each other. Problem is, they've lost their heart. Once upon a time, they knew what they were fighting for and why. Now they are just going through the motions. It used to be about protecting the people of Earth. Now it's more about fighting the NegaVerse. Their pure motives have been lost, and they just don't care anymore. Something needs to happen to remind them of why they are fighting. And I'm afraid that something is going to involve Mercury.

Sorry it took me so long to review... I mean this is probably my tenth time reading this chapter... ah, screw it. Anyways, nice job, I wonder how the movie characters will work with the G1 characters?

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Even if her intentions were good, Amy is in SO much trouble.

am reading the whole thing

Very interesting stuff!

great story a love tnsformers and sailor moon there should be way more sailor moon/transformers crossovrs

In your summary you said the Dark Kingdom but in this chapter you talk about the Dark Moon (which could either be interpeted as the Black Moon Clan or the Dead Moon Circus). Then later you mention Beryl so I think the Dark Moon might have been a typo.

I used to watch Transformers when I was little only to find out later when I got into anime (by way of Sailor Moon) that I had already been watching anime since I was little. _

Anyway I have not read any Transformers fics (as I mainly read Sailor Moon as it is my first anime love) but I think this will be very interesting.