Good It's A Brillant Chapter,Will You Write Another Fanfic_

Great But It Be Interesting If Snape Come At Night To Rape Her

This is great and I cant wait for your update on Friday :)

This might be the worst writing I’ve ever read and I’m only on chapter one

I'm sorry but what a CRAPPY ending to a nice though rushed story. I literally don't like reviewing negatively but seriously what made you write this sort of ending. It was going well but then you have to go give it a stupid ending which makes no sense. You can write but you must not just go and rush it when you do not know how to end it.

Wtf kind of ending is that? Seriously? I now feel like I've wasted thirty minutes of my life on a decent story that legit ended in the most obscure and irrational way. I mean if you were over writing it there were a million other things you could have done...sheesh

brilliant fic! but the ending was confusing. and really bad

This was amazing and I liked the end but it was a tiny bit random still LOVED it tho xx

that was a terrible ending! I was enjoying the story until the last chapter. it was rushed made no sense and was just was terrible!

Never ever in my life I thought I would rewiew something, not because it is not worth it, but I prefer to leave writers free to navigate by stories, but if this HORRIBLE ending was a troll, even though, it was the worst I’ve seen, and if you just want to shock, I suggest at least you should try better... (waste of reading, and waste of writing to you, since you obviously don’t give a damn!)

Was the end supposed to be a joke or... the end seemed very rushed and made no sense whatsoever. Um... very strange I hope that was a joke, but other then that decent story

REALLLLLLYYYYYYY good story

What the actual fuck...

The story dtarted out really well and was very interesting but WTF happened in the ending. Do not revommend this the ending is just stupid.

What...was that a joke?