Reviews for Why Can't I
Guest chapter 12 . 4/17/2015
Love this story. May x Paul 333
Angelkitty24 chapter 10 . 2/19/2015
No offense, I don't know why I'm reading this anyway, you know since I hate the pairing but, you made Dawn like a brat, and made May, like all good and perfect. No need to be mean I just felt like you were picking favorites. Anyway, good story!
TearsOfMusic chapter 12 . 6/4/2010
I seriously and absloutly LOVE this story im glad you made it a long time ago or i'll have to wait until you make new chaps (sorry if thats a insult)...anyway i love this its really nice!
Wolfxo88 chapter 2 . 4/28/2010
i think may should pick drew
kurusui chapter 11 . 4/12/2010
WHy did May have to lose...
AoiCherry chapter 12 . 1/11/2010
This is a really good story! I had kinda hoped that May would've won though... Hey, good choice using Blaziken. I always imagined what would've happened at the Wallace Cup if May had used Blaziken instead of Glaceon. ) I love May with anyone, since she is my favorite character. _ Great story! I find very few May/Paul stories here.

~ Sakura Uchiha Hyuuga no Sabaku
Kahtita chapter 12 . 9/20/2009
Altough im a contestshipper, i liked the story.
adanna chapter 9 . 9/2/2009
make a sequal!
Drowning in Sin chapter 4 . 7/30/2009
This is a really awesome story!

I can't stand Dawn x Paul, but I like the idea of May and Paul.

I'm going to be making a story with them in it only its going to take place in the Sinnoh region.
Summer Nickle chapter 12 . 6/22/2009
This story is cute! I like it. Good job!
ShadX - Shadow Elf chapter 12 . 3/9/2009
This is really good!
Darkinsanity chapter 5 . 1/23/2009
This fanfic gets to me, "points to heart." Right here!
SmilingArtist chapter 12 . 12/31/2008
I love it!

Can you please write a squeal?
SmilingArtist chapter 11 . 12/30/2008
Kinda wished that May would have won...

Oh, well!

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
SmilingArtist chapter 10 . 12/29/2008
I'm glad that May used Blaziken.

Thanks!

Please update soon!
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