Reviews for Losing Focus
Issy chapter 1 . 8/31/2016
I just discovered this story and the only thought I had was "Noooooooo! Don't stop there! I'm gonna cry if I don't know what happens next!"
It's fucking hilarious! Thanks for the psycological input and if you ever ever ever see fit to continue 'Losing Focus" I would be the happiest being alive.
kocoum chapter 1 . 7/29/2016
? whaaattt why is there no more chapters. ugh im so sad that this was published in 2008. which means you're probably over writing fanfiction? but guess what, NO ONE GETS OVER NARUTO. THIS FANDOM SUCKS YOU RIGHT BACK IN. SO COME BACK. COME BACK HERE TO DO THE FANDOMS DARK BIDDINGS. come back, come back come back.. (continues to repeat but fades off into the distance) I hope you read this.

oh and if you do see this and you're still in this fandom, i will fuckin do art for you. i will draw narusasu shit for you. please come back.
DoctorWhoFreak3 chapter 1 . 3/27/2016
omg you can't just leave it at that please continue! I love it!
RoniBopShop chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
Oh this is hot! Are you going to update or have you put it on another forum?
icutkey chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Aaaawww...where's the next huhuhuuu...
QB100 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
you must finish this story soon the suspense is killing me and probably the rest of the yaoi loving world
mountaingirl47 chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
All I can say is that this better be continued!
LyRiCho chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
8O... smuttyness! loooooooooooooooooove it!
anitosh sovereignty chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
Holy shiz, I think I ve found my new fav narusasunaru author! I can't wait for the next update! xD
unconnected chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Holy.. :

I can only hope that you haven't given up on this fic (or the fandom, itself). :( This is amazing. Even for the first chapter.

I'm really curious about what happened in those 6 months. Please find time to continue! Or at least, a decent closure. :)

Looking forward (hopefully) to more of your future works. :)
Stormshadowfire chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
alittle short but it was nice to hear softerish side from saske
MoshiMoshiQueen chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
Aw man...I guess it is too much for me to ask if you could please continue this?
katsurag chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
You look good, was too good!, has intrigued me a lot with the first part, hehe will be very interesting to see as they arrive at 6 months after , congratulations, you are doing a great job!

I hope you understand the English so gross, I'm honest I'm using the translator, but I can not help it! I have to leave a RR if or , muhcco captivated me the story that "Rukia" translated into Spanish, called "Not My Lover", was amazingly spectacular!

Hope all goes well! your cares much, bye!
animewiccan725 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
that was very very very good...easily sidetracked me...just thinking of those pics...*starts to drool heavily*...now i know what i'm going to be thinking about before i go to bed tonight...i sincerely thank you for putting that image into my head .~
Pyro-Neko-Isis chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
ok, there will be more... Right? Please don't leave me hanging on this, I realy like it :D
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