Niiiiiiice. Quite the 180 from what I just read, a welcome change. Thank you.

Omg...poor Geru-chan...

Something only you know is true and is disregareded by others...happens aaaalllll the time...

Keep it up! 8DDDDD

This is how they REALLY died. I just know it. Great story. I love the gore and...I thought his sister was still alive...oh well.

This... was... so creepy. It totally freaked me out.

But...

I have ONE thing to ask...

Was that THING supposed 2 be a pokemon?

Or just a creature from your twisted imagination?

LOL. ;D

it is very stupid and dumb i like poopy

excuse me here for tenders eyes reading this... FUCKING CREEPY! i liked though

when are you going to update Elite Protection?

Luv your stories, by the way.

Awesome! I loved this story! It was very creepy.

This story was so creepy and freaked me out but yet at the sae time it was amazing.

Such a creative story line, I REALLY enjoyed it : )

Anime-rocz-nd-u-no-it

Holy crap that was creepy as all hell!

...They changed where the review button is. XD;

Anyway, that was teh creepyness! Poor Gary! I don't blame him for being so scared...*shiver*