Having read Miranda's fic recently I found this extra sidefic delicious. Draco must be so much fun to play with, he can be whiny, ruthless, pontificating or clever but he is rarely uninteresting.

Thank you for this fic. A real pleasure to read.

This was really good. I enjoyed it. Well written.

Well he certainly has learned a lot.

He was close.

This was really good. Well written. I like his interactions with nuri

Poor draco is so confused.

Well that went rather well.

Poor draco. daray is a pain.

This was good. Kinda feel bad for him.

This was good.

Your punctuation is better than Miranda's xP
Nice side story :)

Excellent! I just read and loved the original story, and you wrote this so well that I would like to respectfully ask if you'd be interested in continuing the original fic? *grins* It doesn't look like Miranda's going to finish it (and I do hope she's okay), and you matched her writing style so well here that it felt like part of the original story! (And you don't mess up your/you're/they're/their, thankfully!) Great story. Thanks for sharing!

Awesome writing... as others have mentioned it feels as Miranda has written these chapters too..its wonderful how you took her characters and wrote this...i know its been very long time and there is very little to no chance that you will write the Cavern story. though it would be wonderful to read.. and what would be more amazing is you completing Miranda's incomplete "A Magical World" (last book in the series).After reading this I believe you could do complete justice to her story.. Waiting to read your next story...

Hello,

I really love this story and I was wondering if you could allow me to translate it in french. There is already a translation going on for Changes in times of war. Meeria is doing it and this speen-off is really interesting.