Lately I've become a fan of your stories and this story by far has been the one that has kept me on the edge of my seat. Your writing style is excellent to read and I love how you were able to changed youy style for this story. The way you wrote this masterpiece of a story mad me feel like a was experiencing this event on a scene, such wonderful wordplay. Tho I am saddened by what I percieve of Axel and Roxas not surviving the hessian attack, the ending was very enjoyable. I hope that you write more stories and I wish you luck for future ideas

I love this story and the fact that you've put in the story from Sleepy Hollow. I just wonder though... how did they actually escape from the Headless rider? Would be nice to know since in the movie, if my memory doesn't fail me, they needed to give it back its head... Anyway, awesome story! Keep up the awesome work, as always! XD

I would have loved to see these characters in a plot based on the Disney adaptation. That's my favorite :) ichabod was a douchebag and a gold digger, but we still didnt want him to die.

I must say... that was amazing. The way you wrote it, like it had been written within the time frame of the story made it feel all that more real. I was worried for a bit. That they would be discovered and Namine would succeed in killing Axel. I was happy with the ending. Though, I am curious? How in the WORLD did they get away from that thing? Did namine just give up after chasing so far? That seems like the probably explination.

Either way, this story was wonderful. I enjoy your writing so much and this piece was phenominal.

So yeah ... in addition to your fabulous drabble, I read this again just for the heck of it. Holloween YAY! XD I reread the last part and then I was like ... Oh yeah... where did they get the money to buy a new home? get a job? and... a maid?

Oh man, the endingg. Love it. :)

**gasp** I've said it before but THIS must be the best I've yet read. So terrifying! But a happy ending, yay! Love, love, love it!

Am I going to review every single thing you've written? Possibly! I'm sure you're tiring of my fawning like a starry-eyed fangirl over your writing but...if the shoe fits!

Seriously this is such enjoyable reading! The tone of the story, the period language. I was so tense moving from paragraph to paragraph when they were together, knowing how forbidden their love was especially in the time & place this is set. So romantic!

And your use of poetry... perfect!

And having Marluxia as the warlock to Namine's wanna-be witch...lovely!

Ah I'm running out of adjectives, so on to chapter 2!

oh man... i think i almost had a heart attack. i was so sure Roxas and Axel were not going to make it. However, i am glad that did. -happy dance-

i'm really glad i got to read such a wonderful story~!

This story was wonderful! I was afraid that it was going to end unhappy. Yet I was proven wrong. I love happy endings. Thank you for the great read.

Oh my God. That was absolutely terrifying. I mean, my heart was racing while I read that. Especially after the appearance of the Hessian. I have never been more afraid in my life. I had chills down my spine through the entire thing... And I was so relieved when the ending came. I thought for sure it would end differently, but when it ended in a way I wouldn't have dared hope for, it was all I could do to keep tears of relief at bay.

As a result, I'm most definitely looking forward to this year's Halloween story. Though it's still over 4 months away. I'm sure there will be many more stories to keep me occupied while I wait.

Aaah! So good! And so amazingly well written! It was a pleasure. You did have me worried there for a second though that one of them wouldnt make it! But the end was just perfect :)

Silly Naminé...You're not supposed hate Axel and Roxas' Relationship, You're supposed to turn into an adoring fangirl like the rest of us have.

Really great story :D

Ahh! What a wonderful story. I really love the writing style for this. It is not a style you see very often. Beautiful job. Thank you.

AWW! That DEFINATLEY was the best fic I have ever read! and most probably WILL ever read! WELL DONE SALEM!

Sorry if I am acting like a fangirl... I CAN'T HELP THAT AKUROKU MAKES ME FEEL HIGH! lol

Please write more stories :) You have a gift for writing, and it should be more widely distributed.. AKA: Get a book published! :):)

Xx Kelsey