this really isnt a healthy relationship and i tried to let it go but sasuke is very violent towards women as are most males in this are *cough* neji and Kiba *cough*

so is it just me or is this child of gods reaction to essentially rape a bit... chill? like she doesnt really express anger just that one statement which was basically "it is what it is". dont get me wrong i love this story i just didnt get it

so wait did she get raped in this chapter orwat bc sasuke sounded pretty rapey when he said "i promise, it'll be short" im confused

No, ignore ll the haters. The story is amazing and I really like it. )

Lovely story. You made my day! :-)
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hey,. thank you for writing this story.,

yeah her name will be Tenten ! this story was so good, even though i didn't get the whole prom thing, it was right after Itachi also got Sasuke to kill himself? It was a bit confusing but just loved the story :) and what happened with the baby? her parents would of found out...

So i know u think this story sucks but i actually really liked it. I personally don't think that this story sucks.

Don't listen to those people. I personally LOVED your story. While reading this it makes me want to write more! It inspired me. All the happiness and sadness that was put into the story was put well. Good Job! I for once don't really care if you made many mistakes. I have made them too. All I care is how good the story was and it is! You should be proud of yourself that you completed it :) Well i hope this helps you feel better.

it was an awesome story :D
hihihi my heart leaped during the 'not-so-romantic' proposal :DDD

It's a very good story! Though I wish you would've developed it more; Sakura seemed to trust him all too easily. Well... "Easily" is the wrong word, more like she didn't resist enough. It was like a sudden turnaround. Kind of like you we're just wanting to end the story already. And I understand you "wrote this story a long time ago and couldn't be bothered to revise it", but I figured I'd tell you for constructive criticism purposes, in case you didn't know. :) Also, you have a tendency to mix up homonyms. Instead of "write" you'll put "right", and so on and so forth. I guess a more readily available example would be in the linking park lyrics above every chapter, where you put "loose" instead of "lose". XD nonetheless, it was a very good story. It was good enough to get on my favorites list, sooo... XD

Ha ha ha Looooooovvvvveeeeeeeddddddd it :-) you're an amazing author.

A really nice story. Loved it.

I loved the story :D I'm glad you finished it, even with some flames. Just DON'T let e'm get you down! Especially a great writer like you(:

3 your story. Keep writing!(x

This Story was so emotional! This was very nice story! I enjoyed it every bit. I cryed when tenten died. This is the best sasusaku story i ever read!

GREAT JOB!