Great story, beautiful ending.

This is painfully good, and I love your portrayal of the Doctor. Because even though he's human, he's still HIM, you know? They put a lot of emphasis on that in the show, and I think it's important that fans who are happy he's with Rose don't overlook how difficult it will be for him.

Well done!

Oh .this has some potential...!

PLEASE KEEP GOING! THIS IS THE ONLY CRACK I GET NOW THAT DAVID's LEAVING AFTER THE SPECIALS...WHINE!

Good job so far. An accurate description of what could have taken place after the beach.