| Reviews for What She Needs |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2017 Wow, and you can't differentiate between past tense and present tense. AKA you SUCK at writing |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2017 What the FUCK is the point of "introducing" the characters? This is fanfiction, in case you forgot. We know who you're talking about, and you did a half-assed job of explaining the characters and backstory anyways. ...SIGH... Honestly, this one shot sucks multiple assholes. |
 AcetaBells chapter 1 . 4/21/2017 aaH holy shit what a story! perfect amount of lemon, perfect amount of cute romance and bumbling teenage edward |
| nessa01 chapter 1 . 10/27/2015 Omg! Great story! ! |
| Jibrah chapter 1 . 9/10/2015 Hahaha i like how it makes no sense, but is still hilarious and super sexy. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2015 The lemons were crap and short. And she should be a virgin. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2015 She's supposed to be a virgin. Slut. |
| morena.davidson.3 chapter 1 . 10/10/2014 That was hot! I think I'd get sick quite often if it meant "resting" at Edward's house. :) Thanks for sharing. xo |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2014 Whore! She should be a virgin. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2014 just sooo sweet |
| Edwardswetdream chapter 1 . 8/6/2014 Wow! Nothing better than a confident edward! Well, except maybe a confident HARD edward! |
| brandofcullencrazy chapter 1 . 3/2/2014 that was really good! |
| Paulina chapter 1 . 7/28/2013 This is great, wish your stories could be a little longer though, they end too soon for me /3 |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 OK, I CAN'T believe you used the words intelligent & Bella in the same story. by the way, blue is Alice's color. Alice lent her a BLUE dress before she went to Prom with Edward. LENT, that means BORROWED, therefore, that makes BLUE ALICE'S color, IT PISSES ME OFF YOU WOULD SUGGEST ANY DIFFERENTLY! |
| VampireMater311 chapter 1 . 6/2/2013 I liked it, but I wouldn't really call this "dirty talking". |
