why have peple reviewed chapters 13 and 14 but I can't see those? any chance you can tell me how the story was supposed to end, please? thx

I really enjoyed this first chapter, it caught my interst pretty quickly! At the moment I'm actually supposed to be doing something else, but this story has sucked me in, so I may read a few more chapters... I can't wait to see what happens next. In case I don't have more time to review, I'll also tell you to update fast. :) I have a feeling that I'm going to enjoy reading this! Nice work!

LOL excellent place to stop...really, truly is :S.

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Donuts for the tailbone :D

Well who got your underwear in a bunch?If its so awful then why would u b stupid enough to write 4 it?You could have been nice enough to just say ur quit wtiting a story (which i actually liked)boks and all that Stephanie Meyers created!U could have at least respected others enjoyment of the books!

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Hi LSB,

Glad to finally hear someone with sense when it comes to Twilight and the relational subjugation that seems to be becoming more acceptable.

I've always hated Twilight based on the principle that the Bella is portrayed as such a klutzy, dimwit with HUGE self-esteem issues and Edward is the suave, aloof embodiment of elegance and power who seems to treat Bella a little bit like one would treat a favourite pet.

Frankly, I hate the three main characters and by book four, the whole thing reads like soaped-up blog. I really enjoyed the side characters though and would love for someone else to take Jasper on a spin-off.

Thanks for keeping it real,

ShockedUp

um well wow twilight isn't the best book ever written and not all of us are very obsessed. you did the right thing to some what end it.

I think it's sad how you choose toturn your back on this story so angrily, it's honestly one of the best ( twilight or other ) fic I followed.

I'm myself not the biggest supporter of twilight. I read the books being very aware of the flaws, in the story, in the characters and in the writing especially. Yet I never felt the need to hate it, worse ( if I had the talent ) to ruin my work. You are very talented and throwing this story away because of lack of sens of the book is a waste.

You manage to create very sensical ( i'm not exactly sure of that word, english is my second language )characters, quite far from what they were in Twilight. I respect your decision and can understand it too, I think.

Still your a very good writer and I would look forward to read anything by you. But I'm sure you could have done something really good with this story .Anyway . Still a very very good story you wrote .

Fuck you then.

I'm confused...

Why do you hate twilight? I'm not such a big fan of it either but I'm just curious as to the sudden change of heart.

Well, this was just pitifully dramatic. So much for the concept of making it your own, which you were doing. I read the story in your profile and to be honest, I just laughed. Kids are going to take from this what they will and if they haven't be taughter any better, that's that. Mind you, I'm not even a Twihard. I do believe this goes toward any fandom.

Dude, I have to say, although I read way to much fanfiction (mostly of the twilight sort) I agree with you. Twilight does indeed involve around the two...how'd u put it?...worst lovers ever? Something like that. Bella needs to grow up, and find someone who she doesn't always think is better than her. She's smart, pretty, kinda funny in a clutzy sort of way, and totally deserves a non-abusive boyfriend. And Edward needs to get his head out of his ass and sort himself out. Too Fucking Perfect. But I guess perfection is really just terribly screwed up, right? I love Ali and Jazz though, and Em and Rose are great too. Ed and Bellz are just...stupid. I know this review was kinda pointless, but I would really love if u replied with some song lyrics :p Thanks for the great read :)

~A

You are very blunt. Lol.

As for you dropping the story because of your realization, I must say that kind of thing happens to the best of us.

I must thank you for writing the ending of the story's plot. I am grateful that you did not just abandon it completely and leave us readers with nothing. Now I can just say I finished reading all of it. The story was very well written and so I hope to see some new content from you. I am terribly sick of twilight as well.

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Little disappointed, because this story was better than the crap characters and plot that were the original haha

Who dumped you? herpes? because if there was a reason you hated twilight you would have written about it and tried to show us too. right? oh i know, Taylor lautner finally got a restraning order. Well, it makes sense.