Loved it

cute

Omg now that's what I called a story . AWESOME. :-):-):-):-):-)

Gosh, this should have happened in the show! It's so sweet. Loved it!

"Lois. You said you loved me and proposed to me all in one day. This was the least I could do to catch up."

LOL, that line was fabulous. I hope you write more Clois in the future, yes? *begs*

I forgot she did propose lol! BEST CLOIS EPISODE EVER. UNTIL BRIDE HAPPENED THAT IS... ]

To quote Rick Hunter: Works for me!

Aw, this was cute and sweet and I totally would have loved for it to go this way on Thursday! Great job on this!

cant wait for the next chapter

funny funny and very cute! i loved it, good job!

hehe...go clark with the closing door thing...i love riding elevators, it drives people insane! lol

cherrypudding

Aww...How sweet! I loved it..;p

Aww! That was such a cute and adorable Clois snippet! ;)

I could really see this taking place in an actual episode. Very nicely done for being your first Smallville fic! :)

Cute very cute. The only thing I would have changed was his last line. When she said in s4 she used the nickname Smallville. It would have been cute if he called her Metroplois. Which of course he has been known to do in the comics.

But other wise I liked it a lot.

This is good. Are you planning on doing a sequel though or just leaving it? Either way I still loved it.

WOW, I totally loved that! You get a bunch of homemade cookies! I love the fact that Lois asked "is this some sort of competition?" I could totally see them doing this on the show. Very good job :)

That was a awesome one shot good job.