Nice!

OMG! This storyis awesome! I love it! and its going to my fav list! Its really amazing! I can't wait for the sequel! Great job! and I love your style!

Thank you for sharing this beautiful fic!

I'm wondering what was said at their argument a year ago.. and I feel so bad for Shuichi. Yuki's such an ass to him all the time. D:

But ahh well, love is so irrational.

Great story!

CONGRATULATIONS FOR YOUR FIC! It's the third one in English that I read. I always have been reading fics in Japanese and Spanish languages. And for few years, it's one of the best ones!

I really like your fic because the way you are writing it is so sensitive and also you arrive to the most deeply thoughts and feelings of Eiri and Shuuichi's hearts.

hey, nice fic!

i do hope you make a seuel! i just can't wait!

do it however you want just be sure to do it!

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GAH! you evil...! That's just cruel!

*sigh*

oh, well. ((I forgive, I forgive. D)) I guess now I'll just have to READ THE SEQUEL!

woot.

That was great. It had me captured from the first chapter. What an interesting way to tell a story! I loved it. Can't wait for the sequel!

its been a long time since I've reviewed anything here (so long in fact I had to reregister my account). I just wanted to say that this story so far is very well done...for the sequel I think you should just stick to Yuki and Shuichi's POV...I really enjoy how you are writting both characters (I think your characterization is right on the money for those two). Please update soon :)

omfg u have to do the sequal please please i have to find out wat happens so please write a sequal please please please oh thank you for writing a good story btw

Wonderful, brilliant piece of fanfiction. Any fic that can make me cry is an auto-fave in my book.

You should continue the first-person perspective in the sequel. It would give the story more personality, I think. Besides, you pulled it off very well this time around; why not continue it?

SO CUTE!

AH! That was fan-f**king-tastic! I really loved the part about Seguchi sending an assasin! too funny!

you should SO do a sequal in third person...I think it's easier to do the comedy from an 'outside' perspective, not to mention you don't have to change POV's everytime you want to describe something someone's thinking...I can't wait to see what you do with this!

aww this is awesome! Once again, i love your descriptions! And i love the fact that after a year of separation, their reunion isn't soppy (both need to heal their wounds, forgive and be forgiven), it would have ruined the story otherwise! Although i love stories written in first person, i think the 3rd person would fit better for the sequel, it would allow us to get the two points of view at the same time, and i think that would somehow symbolise their reunion, but then it's just my opinion! Ps. You'd better tell us what the fight was all about or else i'll harass you until you do so! lol. pps. you're not helpful toward my addiction to Eiri! thanks to your story, i love him even more and just wanna hug him! :-D

hello,

well, well, well... the last two chapters were very charged in emotion, it's nice to see them back together but I hope they talk soon.

For the sequel I would prefer the first personn, but it' up to you !

thanks for shuichi's chapter

crazysnape

I'm going to have to say that the sequel should be done in third person. In third person there is that omnipotent view that you get as a reader. It helps with foreshadowing, which I could see being useful in the sequel. It gives a broader range of writing then in first person really. Well that's what I think anyway.

I really enjoyed this chapter. And I'm anxious to see the sequel. Good Luck!

AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME! I LOVED your story! You have it noted as completed?...but you ended it as to be continued? I hope you do continue it! I would loved to read another chapter!