It needs a lot of grammatical corrections. Spelling corrections and sentence syntax correction. Sometimes words, such as "I", were missing, and it made the story hard to read. I highly recommend some serious editing. But that is a nice start to a story. :) Quite entertaining!

i do love this fanfic but can you please put more, if you want more privite moment :D

YAYYAYAYAAY! You continue it and I'm so in love with the new chapter! glad you update it! Taichi and Sora finally together!

Welp glad you finally finished. And I'm glad Tai and Sora finally got each other. The final chapter was pretty much what I expected, but I have to say, you should take more pride in your work. Slow down when you write, check your spelling.

Hey. Well to start this is a pretty good story. I hope you can find the time to get an update out to all of us here on FF. It has been a couple months already D. I just can't wait for the climax... Update soon

Good stuff, hope you continue soon cause this is looking great! Just remember to check you're spelling sometimes, got confused at the weather part, you meant whether right?

OMEGA OMEGA OMEGA! Finally you continue this fic! I've been waiting for ages and LOL i love this chapter, I can't wait for next Chapter! I sooo curious what Taichi want to tell her...

So... next chapter is gunna be the awesome party chapter right? I've waited so long for it I can hardly stand it! Please, please please, update soon. I want to see the grand endding! I hope your going to make it awesome. Lets see, obviously Tai likes Sora... but then again everyone else in school says he's the type that takes advantage of girls so we'll have to see. I don't mean to over analyze but in the theory the next chapter should be pretty long if its the last chapter, becasue Mimi and Sora have to get ready, then Sora helps Tai, and then the party. Or maybe your doing two chapters? Sorry I know I'm rambling, but I've don't a lot of thinking about this story over the months.

I guess we'll see what happens at the party. So far it seems more like Tai is...I don't want to say corrupting, but changing Sora, while Sora isn't noticibly changing Tai for the better.

Pop? Do they call it pop in Canada like they do in a few states in the USA? I was really surprised to see that. Interesting story so far. I wouldn't have pegged Sora as being part of the geeky crowd, but the reasons for it make enough sense.

This is great. You need to update more frequently

Your back! Yay! This was a pretty good chapter. But something tells me that the next 2 are going to be the best yet. I hope Tai and Sora tell each other how they feel at the party, and then some. Please don't let it be another month before you update. That said... please update soon!

I love your story it's getting really intresting and I hope you update soon can't wait to read the party chapter.

I hate it when authors slowly torture us by telling us whats coming (the party) and then putting like a billion chapters in between the time they tell us and when it actually happens... Ah who am I kidding I do that all the time. My point is I LOVE THIS STORY. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

thanks for updating, ow man this is getting good. your making it really interesting to. please update as soon as possible. :)