Wow...my heart. I thoroughly enjoyed this, your way with words is beautiful, I'm so glad I decided to go this far back in the fanfiction archives LOL. Glad I found this. Well done!

Wonderful and melancholy. Great work

Because he would do this, wouldn't he?

I'm crying and that says the most of all. This is beautiful, beautiful work and one of the most powerful fics I've ever read.

The simpleness of the language, the unwritten ideas and thoughts... This is amazing and heartbraking and I should be going already but I just had to read this and I'm now totally regretting it because of the tears...

But thank you. In some way, this made my day.

I don't know the real purpose of this story. All I know is that it is COMPLETELY and TOTALLY beautiful. It is heart-wrenching, it is heartbreaking. It is everything and nothing at the same time. I'm in awe. GREAT JOB!

Oh, this was lovely. Wonderful imagery, and the words just trip off the tongue. Very nice.

This is absolutely wonderful. I know you wrote it ages ago, but this is definitely one of the best Iron Man fics I've ever read. I like the maturity of it, and the reality of it. And I love that you captured something different of Movieverse!Tony. And I really love how the question of the ocean is never really answered for Pepper. I love how honest and raw this is. Thank you for writing it. :)

As I write this review, there are tears in my eyes. That has to be one of the saddest iron man fics i've read. Wow. I love it, it was fantastic! Write more!

Oh, wow. Ouch. Very beautiful... If pain can be described as beautiful. Poor pepper, poor Tony! Lovely writing... very moving.

Amazing, absolutely amazing. I love how everything is in character, and how everything plays out life-like. It's brilliant how the short sections can pack in so much emotion in such little quantity!

Aw! *sniffles* Please make a sequel! I need to know what the hell Tony was thinking! *hugs pillow and cries*

This is really good. I love it. In fact, I almost cried at the end. The emotions of each character were easilly felt through their actions and dialogue alone, no explanation needed. I liked the ending a lot too. It was bitter sweet in the most perfect way. There is nothing I could recommend for you to change o improve upon. This story is totally perfect the way it is. Great job, 5 stars for you!

I was crying half way through this story. Great story.

Aww such a strong moving piece! I love the continuity of the idea of the ocean and the pictures and the way you keep that base while still moving in different directions. excellent!

I really liked this. I'm not sure what it is exactly about it that appeals to me so much, but it was really amazing. I'd love to see you writing some more Iron Man stuff.