I did enjoy this story very much. It had nothing to with the dark lord and death eaters just Harry and Ginny living and loving each other.

Just reread your story and still loved it!

Woman hides child from Father for no reason. Never feels guilty, never apologizes and is instantly forgiven. Sounds totally legit.

Hi there, I love the story! It has been a really enjoyable read. Just wanted to let you know that throughout the story you spelt quite (as in it was quite sunny) as quiet (as in no sound). I just thought I’d let you know to avoid confusion. Keep writing xx

Amazing work so far! I really liked your HG!

A very nice romantic story! Please do write some more! ️

First off. You are a good writer. Som spelling, and some words missing. But the story flows pretty good. Though in this chapter where there is this whole mess of running away, and the secrecy around the kid. I feel that you are spot on with the whole thing with Ginny, but you kind of skipped the whole emotional bomb that should be Harry.
First of all. He thinks he did wrong by her. Fair enough. Dick move leaving, they need time to work that out.
Second. He is told he got a daughter without his knowlege. He should be angry at her for not telling. That would be justifyable rage, and maybe he would accept that without much fuss. After all she might have tought that she could not reach him. Now, by that route, he would reflect his rage onto Ron for his betrayal. After all, the guy had every possible chance to tell him.

So the realistic senario would be that either she let Ron take the fall, or she takes responsebility of the secrecy of their child. I got no impression of her having any guilt over having kept his child a secret from him either.

So while kind of sweet, Harry's side of this debacle missed passion. So my tip to you, is to go back write in some more in that part, and this story would rise another couple of ranks.

This was meant as constructiv critisism, and it is simply my view on things, and i'm hardly a pro myself, but I hope you find it helpfull..

Keep up the good work.

sweet; I'm sorry happy things got to be a family again! I am so proud of all the characters acting responsibly and reasonably - Ginny forgiving Harry, seeing the benefits of having him home, not lashing out.

I am so happy that Harry also "did things the "right" way"! Being honourable, and going -engaged - wedding - baby making. It is obvious he cares for Ginny and truly does not want to risk hardship and so does things proper. Lots of respect for that!

Maddie is so sweet!

The story itself did not have much action, in my opinion it truly was all fluff/romance. Normally I read more of a mix of high action and romance.

Thanks for writing!

Adorable story.

I'm sorry but I find Harry selfish. To go away and stay in America for so long and two of his reasons are because he feels free and a good career. If I'm Ginny, I can forgive him but won't trust him anymore

Very nice story.

Great story

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I loved this story, Please do not take it off the Website like HGFan1111. I was so disappointed, I have read How it used to be so many times, its one of my favourites, Keep up the good work.

Awwww, how cute! That was so sweet, I loved Maddie!