I have just one problem with your plot, Wanda literally cannot lie, everyone can see through her lies she's that bad, so how come Ian wouldn't believe her? I love your story, don't get me wrong, but that's kinda been bugging me a bit.

LOVE THIS STORY! Ian & Wanda are such beautiful characters! Wish I could read more!

Ian and Wanda forever. 3

You are such a wonderful writer. This story was fantastic!

The last chapter was so dramatic, I hope everything turns out all right.

Still dying in the amount of fluff and still lovin it. But the foreshadowing thing at the end... Plot twist! I hate them as a reader, love them as a writer. Anyway, buhbye for now x

Oh my god, the fluff is so much that i might drown in it and die but i would die happy bc this story is awesome and you rock and okay bye gotta read on

GREAT CHAPTER! made me tear up a little. ;)

it was sooooooo touching! you have a talent that needs to be shared:)

omg! it was sooooo good! it is probably one of the best fanfics I have ever read, and this is only one chapter! lovin it so far:)

Love the relationship between Jared and Meliane!

Hey, are you continuing the sequel, because you haven't updated in a while :(

thats a lot of fluff n emotion,it became so realistic i didnt knw who i ws anymo ;( ;)

Okay I finally stopped being too lazy to comment. A. Thank you for writing this because I was craving more Ian and Wanda after the books ended. B. You write a lot of the characters, especially mel, very well and true to form. I have a few critiques that are essentially worthless because you wrote this a while ago, but I'll note them anyway just in case you keep pursuing writing romance stories. The first thing i noted was that Ian didnt like Wanda calling herself a soul, but in the book it was decided souls were beautiful, peaceful creatures who didn't fully comprehend what it meant to take a human life before it was too late. Ian in the book liked that Wanda was a soul. The other thing was simply that Ian is wickedly possessive in this, and while I know that some of that was meant, the fact that they can't be away from each other for more than five minutes is a little exhausting. In my writing/reading experience, it's much sweeter to 'indulge' in moments together, or to do small things without noticing them like smiling at each other from across the room.
That being said (and making myself sound like a know-it-all douche), I really do like your story and the way you write different personalities. It takes a lot of dedication to write a story as long as this, so thanks!

You have real talent.