muy bueno, continuarlo plisss

I really like this story,maybe you should do one when their at the beach for vacation. I will like to what happens. Thank you.

You perfectly captured all of the characters, this is an amazingly sweet and fluffy piece of fanfiction, and I'm a little saddened that you didn't continue it.

Oh well, awesome job!

This is overdue by six years, but I don't care.

MAKE. MOAR. NOW.

I feel your suffering Soul, I do. The UST in the air is absurd. But it's so adorable!

Mm... My only complaint (which may have been stated before) is that, canonically, Maka can't dance.
Though I supose thats a small thing. After all, all fanfic is different than the original, and thats a rather small thing to complain about, it's just kind of jarring.
Of course, the fact that everyone is in character helps a reader ignore things like that. These two are so cute.

Lol

Ragnar OK u perv

Aw man that's the end ; ;

Crona was just too adorable in this...and drunk Crona fondling Maka is hilarious XD

Hope you do more sometime! Pretty please with a cherry on top?

Uh you make me want to date a shy guy

Last sentence in chapter one 0/0 made me squeal omg they are super cute(shy guys) I want to be maka because of you clap clap clap

I love this pairing. I'm the shy type but kinda brave. I wish crona the best. The perfect romance.
Great story I loved it. Thank you.

So cute. . . I can barely breathe through all the cuteness. . .

You probably do not want to continue so you gave it to rain but its a good story finish it C 7-9 and fin beauty of the broken soul by rain because they a good and fun and fluff

Fin this with ggrain and ask ggrain if you can fin beauty of the broken soul because it was so good and could use 20 more chapter. At least ask ggrain to finish if it has been at least 2 years.