This is so cool! You've really got me on the edge of my seat. I haven't been on Furcadia for years, but your fanfic is making me feel really tempted to visit again! I really love how you've got Dragonfriend - I take it he's a bot? - characterized. I'm still thoroughly enjoying your rich and vivid descriptions of the landscape, too!

Oh, I really like this. Its not often I get the treat of seeing a fanfic that is written with good grammar and spelling like this one it! I really love how your narration flows so smoothly. The plot is exciting, too, even though his adventure has obviously only barely begun. All sorts of questions pop up in my mind, like what DO his powers do? What happens if someone steals that emerald from him? Taylor/Lirren is a really, REALLY cool character! I love his attitude. He's not scared, nor does he have the faintest clue what's going on. He's just being sort of laid-back and accepting of all this. :) It makes me wonder what his reaction to the first truly hyper Furre he sees will be! LOL. I love what you've got so far, and I hope to see you update it as soon as you get your next good chance to! :)