Reviews for Secret |
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Rookblonkorules chapter 1 . 10/1/2018 This is so sad! So very in character for JJ. I wonder how many people consider that she might just have the hardest job out of any of them. |
spk chapter 1 . 1/1/2011 Loved you insights into JJ's character. :) |
SignedSealedWritten chapter 1 . 12/10/2009 This was very VERY well written. |
cuecardemporium chapter 1 . 11/2/2009 Alrighty, correction. YOU are so going into my favourites. |
spinningleaves chapter 1 . 10/20/2008 Aww poor JJ! That is a really serious weight to carry. I love this piece and the way you examine JJ's pain but also show her strength. The one line where she begs her legs to stay strong so she doesn't steal the moment is really great and so very JJ. Excellent! |
Sue1313 chapter 1 . 10/8/2008 Poor JJ. How awful it must be to have to be the one to choose which case to give to the team. Se does so need to talk to somebody or else she could have a breakdown. I do hope this becomes a longer story. It is so good. |
Sue chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 Loved it! :D Great job |
rogueandkurt chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 You're back! Weird - I spent most of the last two days re-reading your old work and wondering why you'd stopped writing, and then I see you updated! This was great, as usual. I think you kept it very in-character, and I could easily see JJ doing something like this. Would be great to expand upon, but it's good as a oneshot as well. Hope to see more from you soon! Keep Smiling! ;) rogueandkurt |
little me chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 Beautiful story! Absolutely loved it. |
Hope06 chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 WOW so powerful poor J.J but she is the other sensitive of the group so I can so see her doing this and of course Garcia would b tracking and J.J she won't let it rest The team loves you keep up the amazing work |
lrigD chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 Thank you for allowing us a look into JJ's side of the story! It must really suck, basically choosing who dies and who lives... And I can imagine her feeling the way she does. You wrote it so good, so accurate... Well done! |
didi2909 chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 Wow. Thats a great story. I really loved it. I can totally imagine JJ doing something like that |
ValleyGirlMeg chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 Really nice story. I know in the show we have seen JJ sorting through files, and Hotch acknowledges in one episode all of the cases she sees, but it is really nice to see how JJ feels/deals with it. Would love to read more if you were thinking of continuing! |
JMcK chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 Awesome. I’ve been searching for a good JJ POV fic since the beginning of summer, but this was well worth the wait. Everything going on in JJ's head is so perfectly extrapolated from the show here. And her grief over a case she passed up is such a logical story for her character, and you've really done it painfully effectively. The idea that JJ just had to do *something* to deal with what happened and that it couldn't involve telling anyone else - that's so true to character. Something like needing to see those dogs rip that woman apart way back when. Something like all her other secrets (Will, the baby, the rest of her family) being kept for no other reason than because she’s in control when they’re hers alone. I kept checking to see how close to the end of the document I was because I didn't want it to end. I could see and hear and feel that phone call to Garcia. Also, loved the use of 'until Hotch grounds her'. Great phrase. Accurate, and yet totally playing with the family imagery. Garcia’s “Usually one talks by speaking” was a great bit, too. I can hear that. Awesome, my friend. Thanks for writing this. |