Don't listen to the idiots below. If they don't like your story, then they don't have to read it. But for me, I think this story is excellent.

Hope it gets finished. Like the story a lot.

You should be shot and your body dumped into a garbage dump. It doesn’t matter if death eaters are under imperious. You put them down hard and fix it later. You do not prioritize their life over innocents and children. You are a fucking idiot who deserves death for this outrageous stupidity. If shoot you myself if you ever prioritized attackers lives over innocents regardless if the reason. Soldiers have to shoot children strapped to bombs. It’s part of war. You do not sacrifice your fellow fighters to protect enemy combatants. You are scum that deserves everything bad in this story to happen to you directly.

You prove with every chapter how stupid you are.

So I yet again Harry isn’t going to pay attention or do something about something important. You really are a fucking idiotic writer.

More pointless stupid shit. I swear if you stuck to what was actually relevant to the fucking plot, your entire story would be 4 chapters.

Harry not telling the headmaster to fuck off made me lose respect for him and the author.

Another waste of a chapter in which you are pointlessly dragging shit out. Did someone pay you by the word? Is that why you write all this pointless drivel? You are a shitty author.

I’m losing interest quickly. You are pointlessly dragging things on and on. Get to the Damn point. Stop wasting so much time on shit nobody cares about. He finds a memory you decide this is a good cliffhanger. Moron. Then you spend more than half the chapter on stupid shit that doesn’t matter at all before getting to the memory and still nothing is known so this is a pointless and stupid waste of an entire chapter. Nothing is discovered, nothing happens, and the plot doesn’t advance at all. Retarded asshat.

Love the story so far hope you update soon

please update

First of all, love the story, and second, when are you going to update? Its been a whole year since you last updated.

Great story hope you find your way back to it someday. Thanks for sharing

WTF? I don't care you have a group of adults trying to attack and kill children its a no brainer stop them no matter what I don't care if they are innocents being mind controlled. kill them without hesitation because all you know for is they are trying to kill children. If anyone tries to second guess you assume they are trying to kill the children as well! Honestly that Imperious defense makes me sick if at least a small par of them did not want to carry out those actions than the curse would be broken. Free will is a guarantee from god! As far as I am concerned in this chapter Professor McGonagall is the enemy with that hogwash she is spewing. Sacrifice everyone on your side to try and save a few that is unwillingly fighting for the enemy? What kind of garbage is that? What do you do if you have children loaded with explosives heading towards a position you are guarding as a soldier? I am sorry but I can not see anyone objecting to the use of lethal force against a group of people trying to attack and kill a train full of school children. Sorry I couldn't help but vent a little there that means well done! Real life rarely is logical. I am actually enjoying the story so far. This rant is in no way a criticism of your story just a rant against the ignorance of some of the characters. Which I assume was part of your plan. Again well done!

So far I am really enjoying the story. However I find Portraits most disturbing. If you have a magical portrait of someone have they truly moved on or is their soul imprisoned in that portrait? Or? is the portrait a few memories lacking a soul? Or? Is it a Horcrux? How is the living to move on past the dead if they can just go talk to their portrait? I think I have to consider portraits creepy abominations. And you introduced Lilly as such an abomination this chapter. Oh well its still been a enthralling story so far. Well done.