Friends... forgive... friends...? Then this is not friendship.

i 3 this it is so dark and creattive

Oohoo so dark. Deliciously dark. Go Tesla. Screw yourself up some more why dont cha? Good jub!

Poor...tesal...why do u want him as a master?...

I love the ending of this! It's very good.

Omg! U are such a good writer! I 3 the story too!

Superb story. I love how you managed to make this both hardboiled and touching - one can feel the aloneness of the characters -, plus there's an eerily evocative quality to the silent, sober tone of your writing that fits the plot very smoothly. Also, your approach to both Nnoitra and Tesla, and their interaction, is interesting and original. A!

Very good, I really enjoyed the read!

Incredibly haunting! For the small amount of words, you certainly communicate quite a bit. An amazing story to read, awesome work.

This is such an emotional and sad story. I like it very much. I has already readed it four times, and any time I've found something new in this painfull knot of emotions. Poor Tesla. He loves him anyway

I don't really like to imagine Nnoitra with anyother person except Tesla...and Maybe Ulquiorra, but This story did kill some time.

Friggen awesome! I jerked back fom the comp when I read the eye gouging part! D So evil, yet, so believable D

So hard to come by Nnotra fics that DON'T INCLUDE NEL as a main character. Not that I hate her, just so some friggen variety people! Tesla is there, too, as you can see in this wonderful fic!

Props, mad props, yo (claps and faves)

I am in love with this story

This might be one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. Wonderful job *two thumbs up*

I'm surprised.

This is really good. I can't understand why it doesn't have more reviews. Well, yes I can, most one-shots tend to have less reviews, but that's not the point. There should be more, I think.

It's got quite a touching plotline, and, if I do say so myself, it would be a nice idea to convert into a chapter story. You can thicken the plot and things like that. You wrote Nnoitra very well, and Tesla too, considering that he's a fairly neglected character.

Not to mention, Nnoitra is one of my favourites and it saddens me to see so little fanfiction about him. He's such a deep character.

Yes, he's violent, yes all he wants is strength. He desires not to be pitied and thought weak. Nnoitra wants nothing more then to be recognised - he doesn't want to be the defended and he doesn't want to be looked down upon. So he gets stronger, he get's stronger to prove to everyone he can look after himself, that he doesn't need help.

It's all very sad when you think about it. Beautiful in a way, no know that even the Espada with (in my opinion) the toughest exterior could be hurt emotionally by the tiniest thing. Tesla recognised that in this story, and he also recognised that Nnoitra doesn't. Do. Mercy.

It's a very nice background piece to Nnoitra and Tesla, it, like I said before, was a very good read.

Ugh, I feel like I've just written the most depressing thing in the world :( *sigh* There truely is no helping an angst-muffin..

I loved it!

Superb. You executed NnoiTesla in my favorite way. Nnoitra has an odd fixation on Neliel and Tesla makes him mad, there's a solemn pattern in your fanfiction and I deeply respect and admire where you took this. You made the pairing stand alone but required other elements. Bravo!