Reviews for Stray Child |
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Sylphrena33 chapter 13 . 1/31/2018 This is a fun story. Ed seems really inexperienced though. He seemed to be a lot more experienced in hand-to-hand combat in the anime (both versions-granted, I haven't read the manga, so it could be different for all I know). However, I do like the idea of Strider teaching him and helping him gain experience. I like this story a lot, you should definitely continue it! :) |
Eli Clark chapter 13 . 10/27/2017 Winry was an idiot for not fixing Ed's leg. It wouldn't have taken her three days to adjust it. In fact, it would have taken thirty minutes at the least. |
Argonaut986 chapter 13 . 10/12/2017 Ed CAN be reckless, at times, but he has a kind heart. |
Argonaut986 chapter 12 . 10/12/2017 Things are getting interesting. |
Argonaut986 chapter 11 . 10/12/2017 A long, difficult trip. |
Argonaut986 chapter 10 . 10/12/2017 Ed is not a clumbsy person. |
Argonaut986 chapter 9 . 10/12/2017 Ed messed up. |
Argonaut986 chapter 8 . 10/12/2017 Strider keeps his word. |
Argonaut986 chapter 7 . 10/12/2017 Things are looking rough, to put it mildly. |
Argonaut986 chapter 6 . 10/12/2017 Things are going to get intense. |
Argonaut986 chapter 5 . 10/12/2017 That was a bit suprising. |
Argonaut986 chapter 4 . 10/12/2017 That was funny! |
Argonaut986 chapter 3 . 10/12/2017 Trisha's patients EXCEDED that of an elf. |
Argonaut986 chapter 2 . 10/12/2017 Ed and Al have yet to fail at their attempt. |
Argonaut986 chapter 1 . 10/12/2017 I'm enjoying this. |