This is amazing. thank you.

Ahhhhhhh i loved this so much! its so great! (Who needs sleep I need this fic!)

Loved this book from start to fin. The characters were realistic, the plot kept me enthralled, and it moved at a good pace which a lot of books don't. Keep writing!

I love your book and I love how Dudley reaches out to Harry and speaks up against his father. You are a very talented writer and I can totally tell!

I enjoyed reading this story very much. Despite the long time it took to complete it, it flows smoothly and seamlessly.

The only point of criticism are the abounding spelling and grammar mistakes which severely hamper the reading flow of this otherwise fluidly written story.

Nevertheless, I will put it in my Favorites, as it is totally worth the reading time.

This is very good!

Can you make more chapters please!

You NEED to update! PLEASE! Think of Harry, think of your fans and think about everyone who reads you awesome stories. WE LOVE YOU!

Brilliant start one little pet peeve is the speech marks sometimes don't add up with the actual speech

This is... NO WORDS SOOOOO GOOD GREAT WRITING GREAT EVERYTHING️️️️

I like the first person POV, it flowed very naturally. The narrative made sense and fit very well. I would encourage you, if you haven't already, to write a story entirely in first person, using POV changes to show different sides of events. This chapter seemed smoother than the others even.

You mixed up legitimacy and legilimancy, otherwise looks alright, though I admit I've stopped looking at quotation marks entirely since it's written clearly enough to differentiate without them

A couple mistakes: pale vs pail, holly vs hollow, and your quotation marks are out of place almost as often as in

awesome! you should write a sequel where dudley and harry keep in touch when he goes back to school - see how that would change things.

This was amazing! It really showed a side of Dudley I've never seen/read. Keep up the great work!