Lovely poem! I just finished this series, and I absolutely loved it, and you captured the feeling of the anime in your poem. Just one little thing- in the 2nd paragraph, you spelled "give" wrong...so perhaps you could fix that. Great job overall!

This is really good! If it weren't supposed to be such an intense show, then maybe this would be how she would first speak to him agian. I always find myself wishing sometimes that it would be tuned down a little so so many people wouldn't get killed and maybe be a little funnier, but then it wouldn't be Blood Plus! I love this series and I think you did a fantastic job on the fic!

I love it!

oh my god! That was awesome...I loved it. Totally favorited