I started reading this story around 11:30 PM. Now, it's 5:08 AM. It was a really good story. Great job

First why did you make me think a little one was dead that was just cruel, I was tearing up about cry when it happened. PS I'm a major Transformers fan girl so that's why, I really like what you did with chromia and Ironhide it made me laugh it was funny. I really appreciate you creating a story even though I hate that you little bit because at the end of chapter 14 when you made it seem like Elita one was offline. But thank you even though you made me cry. Good night.

When you said optimus prime was there and. Then Ironhide had a gun in his face I spealed super loudly in surprised that no one in my house work up

Ok so I've just found this master piece and I binge read it all cuz I seriously couldn't walk away from it. All the characters are so wonderfully writen, and you totally had me going with the cliff hangers in the last couple of chapters. I laughted, I cired, I yelled at my laptop when you made it seem like Elita had died lol. Great job, I'm now going to read your other fics! x

Ngl I only clicked on this because my sister is called Áine (and her twin is called Caoimhe, so I had a good laugh when that was revealed too) but I'm honestly amazed by this. This is an incredible story and I really need to go digging deeper into fandoms if jewels like this keep showing up

Okay, tbh, ur an amazing writer. I adore you story, I adore all of ur stories. Continue writing! Don't let the flames burn you down!

OH MY GOSH I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I THOUGHT ELITA WAS DEAD BUT THEN SHE WASN'T AND YAAAAAAYYYY! AND CHROMA AND INRONHIDE'S REEUNION! THAT'S EXACTLY AS I IMAGINED IT WOULD BE LIKE! PROWL! OH MY GOSH IS THERE A SEQUAL THERE BETTER BE A SEQUAL I GOTTA GO ON YOUR PROFILE AND SEE IF THERE'S A SEQUAL...AWSOME WRITING BY THE WAY THIS IS AMAZING!

I love this chapter. Really shows the buildup of emotions between the siblings. I truly don't feel bad about anything because now the siblings know more about each other and now they can trust a little more. Also, thanks for kidnapping Nolan. It proved that Nolan is just as fragile as Aila when compared to transformers.

I like the part where Aila showed a backbone. She knows the danger but wants to help Elita anyway. I admire her for that, to bad Nolan thinks she needs special protection when he is just as vulnerable as her. I hope his overprotectiveness and male stupidity cause more trouble later. Love conflict.

Man I am kind of disappointed how similar Nolan is to his farther. Not trusting his sister with sensitive topics even though its been proven she can keep a level head even in extreme situations. Like when she first meet Elita one and did the smart thing and ran back to the house once out of her shock.

In my opinion, if I ever met someone as VILE as that man I would have shot him POINT-BLANK. There are very few things that could ever get me angry enough to just point a gun at someone. Seriously, I've personally seen what Those kind of people are like, if you can stop them then DO IT.
(Sorry about the rant, people like that disgust me. I do like your story so far though.)

DAMN IT IF SHE DIES I WILL PERSONALLY COME IN TO YOU'RE HOME AND CUT OFF YOU'RE FINGERS!

WWWWHHHHHHAAAAAATTTT!

Aine the human Red Alert XD

I really love this story! One big roller coaster ride of emotions and drama! Keep up the good work and now I'm going to see what else you have. Keep up the good work!