Rahne"s accent is amazing

Exciting! I like the way you wrote it! I mean, who hasn't been wondering what it was like for the poor New Mutants?

Three cheers for Jamie's awesomeness. The description was good and I liked your take on what happened.

Don't worry, Rahne's accent kicks my butt too. It's almost impossible for me to type out accents, including Rouge's, but hers is one of the hardest to do.

I love the major role that you gave Jamie and Sam, two people that really need more of a fan-base, and the amount of angst was perfect.

I also giggled when you pointed out that Ray didn't get any dialogue. I hadn't even noticed that until you pointed it out, which is sad seeing as I love Ray, but the story is still really good without him talking.

Hopefully you'll put more up soon.

Ray apparently isn't allowed dialogue,

This is awesome. Everything - how you set up their different reactions, Sam's POV- everything was great. I was so inspired, in fact, that I've written a one shot based on this one. I hope thats okay with you. I thought I already asked for your permission, but just to be sure... Check it out? I can mention that your story was the inspiration, even. Great work. I ramble.

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I was definately dissapointed that the show didn't show more of what happened to the New Mutants and Scott and Tabby, but I really liked your take on it. I thought that your jamie was amazing, and I also really liked your Sam POV. Overall, I thought it was great!

One word: AMAZING.

This is blows my mind. It's interesting to see your take on the events and thoughts. You did a really great job!

LOVE Jamie in this, and your details and dialogue are great!

i really liked how jamie kinda sorta saved the day in this fic, gives cookies with frosting x's on them! XD

Looks like someone did their research.

Always love some Jamie-awesomeness.

Keep it up. I can't wait to find out how the New Mutants were keeping themselves busy later on in the Morlock tunnels.

Good luck. dixon

This is really good!

I've always wondered exactly what happened while the mansion blew up and this is a really good rendition.

This may very possibly be a 'worst day ever' :)

I love all your work so keep it up!