Hey there! Really liked it! Cloud acts like I would imagine him to. Maybe I am too much of a Zack X Cloud fan, but I feel they are better off together :P Nice chapter.

I'm sorry, I like the way you write but I really hate your Cloud. I think it was absolutely horrendous of him for the way he's treated such a poor girl. I only read up to this chapter to see it end with her but I cannot finish this fic. This is an absolute first since I only read yaoi and I read this for yaoi, but I just cannot HANDLE or like this Cloud. At all! I cried with her! Like WAT!? Me liking an OC more than the damn protagonist himself?! I can't even..!

I would flip tables n' shit if my partner treated and said shit to me like that when I loved and treated him like Rhea did. I know, 'get over it, its just an OC/fic so enjoy the yaoi now,' but I can't. I just caaannn'ttt.

I'm sure your Cloud is an awesome well-intentioned guy at heart, but I would love nothing more than to castrate him with a rusty spoon. Well, you probably don't care anyway, LOL.

Great story! I love it! I truely love how you built up their relationship and I think it's wonderful how they end up together and you continue the story by sticking to the original in Crisis Core. Thank you do the wonderful story!

I loved this story. It was crafted so nicely and truly an interesting read

Nice fic! I love the interaction between Zack and Cloud! My only wish is that you didn't include Rhea in there. it just doesn't seem right that Cloud has a playmate around. Nonetheless it's still an awesome fic! Thanks for sharing this. Running to the sequel now!

Dear God! This story is interesting :) I really admire your writing skill Zack is quite cocky here, but of course that is why Cloud loves him cheerful and so ful of himself haha

Thank you for sharing this work of yours

Pardon me, but I MAKE A WRONG COMMENT for your story "What's Left to do but Wait", that comment is supposed for this story...

so... i just want to told you how beautiful the story What's Left to do but Wait, it's really heartbreaking and so sad you really make me cried...

that is why I'm really thankful that you're sharing your story thank you

wow! this is one of the best story that i ever read! it's sweet and just so... sweet! XD

i love this very much and i'm very thankful that you had decided on writing this

you're awesome! and thank you for this!

... that was cold... interesting story.

This is really your first fic? Excellent job! I loved reading this story. I really liked your portrayal of the character's personalities, and the way you tied it in together with the main storyline at the end was fantastic. Thank you for the read : )

Sorry I didn't review on your other chapters, but this was complete so I didn't want to bug the crap outta ya for reviewing the others!

Its really good! I loved it all...merrily merily...

I'll be reading the sequel now! Promise to review those if its not complete yet. :)

i love it! its so cute

This is actually very good story. I like it very much.

Awesome.

...Just, Awesome.

I'm heading off to read the sequel now!

oh my god, this story was so damn GOOD! pure frickin awesomeness, so cute and it made me sob.. prob five times (yes, i know, i'm over emotional.. xD)

Haven't even checked (yet) if you have written a sequel, you prob have, but if you haven't.. you must. please. i'll buy you a ton of cookies. or pineapples, if you share clouds taste in food ;D

Oh and sorry for my bad english, hopefully it's understandable.. x(

so cute rly liked the story :)