Reviews for Centrefold |
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sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 8/5/2016 Ed is so adorable. |
lluviabrillante chapter 1 . 11/2/2014 The end is the icing on the cake. Very nice. |
BlazeingEcho chapter 1 . 9/3/2014 Oh. My. God. I love it! |
ButterflyArtist chapter 1 . 8/23/2011 I wish i cud have seen da picture. I MEAN! Funny story love it. The way fullmetal came rushing through the Cornal office he made it seem like it was him who was naked in da picture. Hope their is a flash back to the poker game nite wit Maes and Roy, Mabe a lemon. |
Irrelevancy chapter 1 . 12/14/2010 OHMYGOD, THE ENDING KILLS. xDDDDDDDDDDD Wow, one of the best things I've ever read~~ :33 Good job! I love how well you captured Maes's calming tone and Roy's different characters in front of Fullmetal and his best friend~3 |
CharmingKarma chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 Ahahahah! Love it XD especially the ending! *falls off couch laughing* |
damncritic chapter 1 . 10/14/2010 I love this! Your description of Roy's picture is amazingly vivid. And I was wondering what Ed wanted... nice ending! :) |
aeskis chapter 1 . 10/3/2010 Oh ... my ... gosh. That last line-my jaw hurts from cracking up! *pokes author accusingly* Your story Centrefold is really, really funny and well-done. I needed to tell you that before I went on with my day. :) Keep writing, Winnie |
Steven Kodaly chapter 1 . 8/22/2010 That was hilarious! Poor Ed is so puzzled - if something is outside his alchemic studies, he really doesn't have much going for him, does he? And Roy and Maes' exchange in the hall was amusing beyond words. |
Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/27/2010 This was Fantastic! Thanks for Writting it. of th T. |
bunyipbabe chapter 1 . 6/2/2010 one of the funniest M-Raters I've read in a long time. I love Maes! He's hilarious. And Ed's last line? That one had me rofling like a loon for quite a while... Anyways, good work! Keep it up. |
HoPeLeSsRoMaNtIc-29 chapter 1 . 3/8/2010 Hahaha... Poor Roy. But the picture would have been really sexy. I want a copy of that! :P Hm... I wonder why Ed would want the magazine back. ;) Nicely written. Love, Niki |
MyDirtyLittleSecret chapter 1 . 8/26/2009 LOL! That was awesome. :D |
Spirits.Dawn chapter 1 . 5/10/2009 BAD BAD ED!NAUGHTY BOY!..he deserves some spanking's...*evil grin* get'em pony!/Roy!...I loved the lemon, it was great..I so wish that this happened in the manga..it would make me watch the series,particularly the one episode. |
RemindsmeofaWestSideStory chapter 1 . 1/12/2009 I adore the fact Ed wanted the Magazine back xDD |