I had to really sit and think about how I wanted to review now that I’ve speed reread through the story(ies).

I completely understand how velocity feels and I hope ironhide can knock some sense into her at least, but cost them valuable insight on the cons. Hardcore is just going to be a lone cockroach I have that feeling. Prime isn’t going to be happy but probably be understanding real quick given what she endured and not all too happy what she dealt with.

Simmons needs to wake up and lay down what happened. Probably give shit to v for a while about trying to kill him but understands why and hopefully the new secdef will back off. She’s almost similar to Galloway but not quite that biased or at least outspokenly. Either prowl or prime needs to point that out and give a reminder about smith (I think that was his name) and how that went down or something to get her to back off a bit.

As far as mirage I hope karma bites him in the butt. Either chromia needs to teach velocity of how to grow a backbone again or heck even sunstreaker give her some tips or advice from prime to an extent but given enough free reigns to finally settle and establish herself as the primes bonded and make it very so very clear. He can’t walk all over any longer and he needs to know that. I keep thinking if he would be the type to plot something but yet I don’t think so as he has interests in success for The Autobots and prime too. He will just be an angry boy on the sidelines and probably look after hardcore and get some info from him that way and later probably piss velocity off about that.

With the cons I can see the chaos growing and wondering if and how a leader will come up on top. With soundwave deciding to take matters into his own hands he has to deal with barricades antics who I think would still keep scheming and plotting to stay at the top of the chain but not quite challenge soundwave either but conflicted about not reviving megs possibly. Course thundercracker could be the one to rattle off to starscream about it and starscream and soundwave would go at it. Then soundwave probably would realize after that hey maybe I should bring back Megatron. That’s just theories so far I have or maybe considerable ideas.

Have you thought of any ideas on what could be happening on cybertron since Iacon was taken back? What about shockwave and his failures to uphold the capital? Who would be leading the teams on cybertron?

Warm regards, Asha.

Ive stayed up so many late nights so I could get myself caught back up with this wonderful story. I had read the first story a long while back before the second was even written. Then I stumbled across this lovely piece of work and realized it was the sequel, and well I just had to reread it all and submerge myself in the wonderful world you created! I'm all caught up now and boy have you thrown a couple of doozies at us! Cannot wait to see what happens next, I'm hanging on the edge of my seat here. :)

Yay! So much love for the last few chapters! I love the way you have written Velocity's turmoil and her dealing of the trauma she went through! So looking forward to see where this goes and how Optimus handles it when he wakes up!

Jetfire?

Chromia Lives!

I'm thinking Simmons might be this universe's Red Alert expy.

Yes they do have a psychiatrist his name's Rung. He's also Primus, cyber-god.

See this is why cats are Superior just ask Velocity.

Are these three groups going to form bloody MECH!?

Greetings,
I can’t remember if I’ve ever left a review on this fic. It’s hard to remember because it feels like I’ve been subscribed to it for so long. I just wanted to say, this is one of my favorite fics to read and I appreciate that you still take the time to update.

Yay for COVID-19! Two updates in a few months! Haha Loved these last two chapters especially the delving into Velocity's psych and her ability to determine what is and isn't real! Can't wait to see what the next few weeks bring! Haha

Yay!

Yay! This notificationmade my day! Loved reading it all from Ratchets thoughts. Loved the way that even after everything, V and OP still try to stay close! Will happily sit and wait another 12 months for another update

Wonderful chapter

Can't believe I hadn't read or reviewed this...Another amazing chapter as always! Love the little nugget about Velocity's backstory! Prowl is definitely starting to get on the annoying side as is SecDef! Really am curious to see what she and Soundwave both have in store! Please don't keep us waiting!