omfg, no. i’ve reaches the end? but it’s so good! there needs to be a continuation! how can you start something this good and so well written to the dust!? what made it all the better was that i was listening to citizen soldier “if these scars could speak” while i reading this. it matched so perfectly.

i hope one day you come back to resume this story. it ended on such a good note but a cliffhanger as well. i love seph and zack’s interactions. it’s sweet and makes seph so much more likeable (even though we were rooting for side from the beginning). it’s really sad that they died in the game. thank you for sharing what you have so far, though.

This was a interesting story. I ejoyed reading each chapter and seeing the angst poor Cloud was going through. This for what it was was amazing!

Whoa! Just... wow! This has been one thing after another and neither Zack nor Sephiroth nor Cloud nor Aeris nor the Turks can catch a frickin' second to breathe! But, it's exhilarating too! And I'm so damn impatient for Cloud to physically meet Sephiroth that I'm all jittery and excited! This entire thing has been a helluva rollercoaster but it's been a joy to read too and, yes, I know it's been a pretty long time since you've last updated, but I hope, (with my entire heart!), that you will decide to come back to this fic and write again someday! I'd, for one, would read it! Of course.

Please make more soon

Ack, it's a crying shame that this is languishing. I know, real life and all... it would be great if you were able to come back and continue - maybe to celebrate the release of the remake when it comes out? Really, there are so few ffvii stories out there (that i can find) as well-written as this- good grammar goes such a long way. Thank you and please come back!

This story is great! I hope you will continue this. I'm actually excited to see Cloud meeting Sephiroth, Great work!

I love this story! It is quite dark, but the characters feel real. I hope you choose to finish this one day :) but even if that is not on the horizon, I wanted to let you know that I have enjoyed reading it!

Loved reading this story. I particularly like that Zack is so much more unstable than what he seems which is why he holds onto Sephiroth, Aerith and Cloud as much as he does.

YES FINALLY AN AERIS THAT'S NOT SELFISH YES

Aww, cut off when it starts getting interesting. Such a shame.
Hopefully this gets picked up one day.

This is turning out to be interesting

I like this Cloud best out of all back in time stories. While some may dislike Cloud for literally trolling his younger self, I can't help but really like the fact. Because serious when he was a cadet he was SUCH a ,selfish,self centered,caress and just uhhh! he went on about being a hero, then went on about his failure, he was a Sephiroth or rather THE GENERAL'S fanboy without nothing a damn thing about the man. It nice that his older better half could point that out no matter what depressing whinnying and bitching it brings. Soo nice way to make Could, and I enjoyed your version of Sephirot. Really one has to wonder how his real personality actually was, in fics it is usually a barely human formed killing machine that doesn't comprehend even the word emotions, others a confused man who doesn't understand emotions or human interactions, but has a million little things running in his head behind that cool icy falls into a - he is human and learning, but very hurt, while less likely than the other two , still a possible for Sephiroth.

Really love this story, hope you get around to updating it : )

Ow please can you keep writing this story...please? You let it in the best part and I wanna read more about Cloud and Zack and how Cloud can react when he sees Seph. Please...I beg you

Good story. Please release more chapters :)