:)

It were kinda nice.

I understand that you don't "support" this pairing. And that this was a "challenge" for you. But to call this an Alice/Bella story is misleading. To call this a Romance story is misleading. If anything it should be relabeled Angst. And called pre-femslash or one-sided Alice/Bella

absolutely adorable! the inner monologue is so sad and beautiful, and the ending is fantastic! love it!

oh, you should definitely be a fan, it's a lovely pairing

awesome story, i really liked it! thanks for sharing

_ Alice and Bella! I'm Glad ur now a semi-fan this little bit of writing u did waws great, thanks

for non-Bellice supporter, you wrote a very nice story :)

that one was really good. )

omg i love it! i wish you would make a second chapter or a sequel to it thatd be great please and thank you

kitty _

Great story. I like how reflective you write Alice as here, the look into her thoughts about Bella were very bittersweet. I really felt for her.

OMG.. haha i never thought of that pairing before.. IT WAS A GOOD ONE! lol

You should make this a two shot! LOL

I know, the femslash thing is pretty weird, right?

But the whole "Bellice" angle of things works out really well...

You should continue!

very good i dont normaly like this paring either but this story was good.

Wow. That was good. xD Hm.. femslash... weird... slightly creepy. xD

wonderful one-shot especially for not being a real addict of the pairing!