| Reviews for When Things Go Wrong, I Turn To You |
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   rosalie2022 chapter 3 . 11/17/2012 i love what you have so far i wonder if Bella will ask Jasper to change her |
| mygoldeneyedvampirejasper chapter 3 . 12/20/2010 awwww omg i love the movie titanic stephanie meye shouldve made jasper/bella a couple but i luv edward and bella to though soooo team jasper |
| TwilightRocks65 chapter 2 . 7/4/2010 You wrote... So… you like? Yes / No? I wrote... So… you like? (Yes) / No? |
| Kathy Hiester chapter 3 . 9/5/2009 Good start. I like the story, |
| reina13 chapter 3 . 6/10/2009 ahh so romantic a movie night i love it! |
| Dark Kit chapter 3 . 5/28/2009 Wow. You really get right to the point of your story, don't you? I hope you take this as constructive criticism... You have a good base idea for the story, but everything is so rushed that the story line pretty much gets lost. I would encourage you to continue writing so your writing style can grow an evolve. I also suggest getting a beta reader. Look for someone who has been writing for quite a while, and that has a good many reviews so you can see just how many people like (or don't like) their writing and what readers honestly think. Good luck! |
| team sparkel fleas chapter 1 . 3/10/2009 lol good loved it |
| Rhith-Rhyfelwr chapter 3 . 3/10/2009 More? Soon? Please? |
| miley3939 chapter 3 . 2/15/2009 Aw Cute! |
| Brown.eyes.and.bushy.tales chapter 3 . 1/6/2009 that was cool, I like it. . |
| halegurl13 chapter 3 . 1/4/2009 I love this story so much |
| bellamarieswan1987 chapter 3 . 12/16/2008 when are you going to update? |
| Jazz is mine chapter 3 . 11/21/2008 How to put this it is well very interesting |
| WoodlandsBrat chapter 3 . 11/13/2008 i love it! hug your neck! |
| tashacullen08 chapter 3 . 11/8/2008 woo. this is great. i love it! |
