Reviews for Daughter |
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Elfera chapter 1 . 3/21/2012 Awww! So sweet plus. Tobias dies. Bonus! I have NOTHING against Tobias. I just like Tobias death fics for reasons unknown. |
saphronandspice chapter 1 . 12/17/2008 This is amazing. So powerful, if you know what i mean. It really is a wonderful story. :) |
perfumeaddict chapter 1 . 1/11/2008 hey i'm reading this after 9 years and i have to say its amazing. very very well done. thanks for the enjoyable read. |
Rikki Felidae chapter 1 . 5/23/2007 I would love to see more about these Chars. but I love the story! |
TobiasAlThor chapter 1 . 9/24/2003 oh my God! I just finished reading this story. There are no words to describe it. Absolutely amazing! Very well done! |
Mandy Kay Miller chapter 1 . 6/27/2003 Ack. I'm only on chapter 2 at this moment, but I wanted to review, so there. This is really good so far... you had a great beginning that really grabbed me and pulled me in. Wonderful. I also enjoy your writing style. The only thing you need to work on is mechanics... hyphens, more specifically. Self-defense and 3 1/2 year-old and things like that should all be hyphenated. There were more other than just those two. There were also a few comma mistakes I spotted... oh, well. Like I said, though, you have great style and plot and things like that, it's just those darn mechanics. I hate them, myself. ) I'll read the rest later. Nice job thus far! |
LorenElfangor Fan chapter 1 . 8/23/2002 Best Fic I ever read! |
LorenElfangor Fan chapter 1 . 8/18/2002 Whoa! That was GREAT, AWESOME, SUPER, WONDERFUL, EXTRODINARY, CUTE, INSPIRING & all that other crap. Keep Going! I LOVE IT! |
Lynn Isabel chapter 1 . 4/13/2002 that was one great story. keep writing. I loved Lorens character, allthough it was so sad that Rachel died |
Armeniel chapter 1 . 1/26/2002 so cool - write more! |
morpherkidvb chapter 1 . 12/31/2001 Very cool. The ONLY thing is that Loren wasn't Andalite enough and was a pinch too much human, but who cares. |
Animorphette chapter 1 . 3/5/2001 Very good story. I really liked the new characters. It is the best of all the Fanfiction I have read. I liked that you hit all the main points of the Animorphs series. It will be soooo sad to see it end. keep writing! |
MeghanJinx chapter 1 . 12/29/2000 ::sighs dreamily:: How long has it been since I read this beautiful peice? I don't know. But Arwen, this was one of the first fics I ever read. And one of the best too. Now it's on favorites. :) |
sulyn chapter 1 . 12/26/2000 sooo good i really don't like most future what if type of fics but this one is a diamond in the rough |
Rachel chapter 1 . 12/19/2000 That was excellent! I absolutely loved it! Great ending and everything a good story needs. |