Reviews for Physical Telepathy |
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Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2018 I think your rendition was both tasteful and erotic; one needn't be CRASS to write a sex scene as it should be. I also think third person is better for this sort of thing. I've read "Dark-spar" fanfiction that is very graphic, but while I wasn't really put off by that (Jasper really has a WILD life pre-Cullens, after all!), that kind of thing would make a mockery out of canon-Edward, Victorian Gentleman that he is. |
trekgeezer chapter 1 . 9/19/2016 Well done! |
missmelly chapter 1 . 11/29/2014 Pretty! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2014 Wow! That was amazing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2014 "Freezing moth" is about as bad a euphemism as it gets, love. |
archy12 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013 Of course it is possible to write about sex without naming the body parts 's just that it is a lot more difficult,and most people don't want to take that much trouble. I was checking the favourite stories of Windchymes and that's how I came to read this one! |
TopazGirl96 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013 Great one-shot :) I really hope you update IGA. Yayy! I'm the 100th reviewer! |
ymi2bz4t chapter 1 . 10/21/2012 Thanks so much for not using those "words" that I also hate. Pet names for body parts just ruin the sex act for me. This rendering of their wedding night was a welcome change from what I am usually exposed to, and yet, I will still those others... I am so weak... Regards... ymi2bz4t |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012 you portrayed their lovemaking in the true sense..subtly eloquent and very beautiful |
Rita01tx chapter 1 . 6/9/2012 Well, I'm in shock...I really am! I never even noticed the lack of "ridiculous euphemisms for reproductive organs or bodily fluids" I was so enthralled! Brilliantly and beautifully done, BB! |
jdmom29 chapter 1 . 3/13/2012 I agree with you. You're one classy lady! Thank you. |
superanbl chapter 1 . 3/10/2012 thanks! it's magical to find something not so literal but so lustful i'm spanish, it's a little hard to write to an english doctor in literature, but i wanted to say it, gracias |
sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 3/8/2012 hot story!loved it. |
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 1/23/2012 I believe you made your point. Sexy, but not base debauchery. Rather poetic even. |
BlindLittleRain chapter 1 . 12/8/2011 it's true, there were no euphemisms, it was entirely tasteful, you really are obviously a talented writer. But I still couldn't take it entirely seriously - it was too poetic. A little overdone. It seemed dramatic. I was laughing a little, I couldn't help it. '-the phoenix of his masculine, human self resurfacing, untamed, from the ashes of his undead body' It works for poetry. It's just too easy to make it sound a little silly. |