Hey,
I like your story and your writting. I find this book intriguing and were wondering if you were continuing it after all this time.

~DarkerShadeofDolphin

I really hope to see this work finished. What you have so far is really good and interesting to see a "darker" Harry.

Not sure what should necessarily be changed as it could mean revamping the entire story. Maybe just carry on and see where the story takes you. It is quite unclear what side Julian is on -but everyone likes a mystery. It just means whatever comes, needs to be realistic enough and within character. I cannot foresee, for example, a complete change to the light unless something major and really drastic happened. That would mean he would continue down a darker path - but how far, since it also seems like he is able to feel emotions.

In any case, hope to see it continue even after all of this time.

First, I very much like this story. Thank you for writing it.

Second, although you are unlikely to continue since the last time you updated was 2011, I think that Julian's main problem is overconfidence. He is convinced that his intelligence, magical abilities, political power, and the favor that the Dark Lord has shown him thus far are enough for him to be able to do whatever he wants without consequences. When those consequences occur, he seems lost and unsure how to remedy the situation. Although he tells Severus that he is aware that the Dark Lord sees people as dispensable, he seems to think he is above that - even before he finds out that he is a horcrux. I like him as a character, but I think he needs to "grow up" and realize that his actions have consequences and maybe to recognize when he cares about a person a little better. Despite his maturity in other areas, it seems like he has the attitude of an "invincible" teenager.

pretty awesome story, hope your senior year goes great.

Your story is absolutely brilliant. Please don't change Julian turning into a werewolf. I think seeing him cope with being one would really make the story interesting.
Thanks for writing such a piece of literature.

PLEASE let Blaise be alive (he's too young and one of the few people left who truly cares for Julian)! Please don't make Julian a werewolf! Or at least let him be cured of lycanthropy! Please let Julian grow a heart *cough* that is to say stop being haughty, selfish and socially-moronic...see, that's how good your writing is...I'm so emotionally invested in this fanfic! XD this is amazing, can't wait for more!

Oh my god, exquisite work, i absolutely adore it, please don't abandon this, even after all these years!

severus and Harry are getting to gather right?

Personally I don't want you to change the fact that Julius is faithful to the Dark Lord. I hate it when almost every goddamn time in almost every goddamn story where Harry is Dark at the beggining he suddenly sees the light! I don't see Light Harry turning Dark nearly as often. It's like people believe than spending some time with a bunch of Gryffindors automatically turns you into one. God forbid someone tells you your name is Harry Potter, because then you can only fight the dark...NOT! It's not easy to change who you are! Especially if you believe something for so long. Your Julius was raised to be Dark and I like to think that he is smart enough to know what he is doing and why. He may not agree with some things that Voldemort does and fight some of his orders, but If possible I would really like him to stay firmly on the dark side.

sparks fly...

nice

I may be a little late to the game but the one thing I would like is for the potion used to make Julian look like Lucius to be reversable, just because I would love to see what reaction Julian has to looking like Harry. Just a thought, you have a great story!

Update soon change nothing its all good though i was sad blaise died

Darling Koinaka,

Are you planning on updating 'Facade' soon? 33

nice