Reviews for Pick Me Up |
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Sketchy-d00d chapter 1 . 1/5 Just gotta day, I love Sasuke’s retorts to the flirts. And then Naruto’s utter obliviousness. I love it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2019 Aghhh I LOVE this! |
Rando Chick chapter 1 . 5/18/2019 Sooooo i accidentally came upon this—again. And read it again. And am leaving a comment again because its that amazing. I need more one shots like this lol. 3 |
lara5170 chapter 1 . 2/6/2019 This was funny but I would like to read a version where everyone is hitting on Naruto instead and Naruto is the one who doesn't want to be there. Like Naruto's appearance with his animalistic appearance turns a bar into ravenous beasts so Jaraiya made a habit of dragging him to all of them so Jaraiya could take advantage of the Naruto effect and get laid while Naruto Sasuke is shocked, amused and upset to learn that in bars others see in Naruto what he does all the time. |
Lily chapter 1 . 5/2/2018 That was awesome! |
Lily chapter 1 . 5/2/2018 :D |
Shadow-Warriour chapter 1 . 4/26/2018 HOLY SHIT I LOVE THIS SO SO SO MUCH LIKE WOWWWW ten years later, i find this story and im so happy i did xD LONG LIVE SNS |
Vivaan chapter 1 . 7/27/2017 Woah... that was pretty. |
Ego Centric chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 Darn near choked and laughingly died. That was a wonderful story! Emotional, yet in character and not so angsty as a number of things I've read (Emo Sasuke). Bundles of laughs and a bunch of great lines from Sasuke. Great job showcasing both their general attitudes and some subtle sensitivities. |
Mystic-Myth chapter 1 . 4/27/2017 HAHAHAHAHA OH MY GOD YES THE SHOT DOWN LINES ARE HILARIOUSLY |
Mystic-Myth chapter 1 . 4/27/2017 yes cuz joining a dangerous organization is a "mid-teen crisis" |
bartlettpear chapter 1 . 10/29/2016 I love your retorts to the pick up lines. And the last guy who said not to bring Sasuke there because it was false advertisement. My heart hurt at /“I don’t encourage them,” he finally said softly./ I laughed when Naruto went Arr lol This was formatted the best on your livejournal. Thank you for this cute piece. |
animemangaobsessed chapter 1 . 10/13/2016 funny as shit lmfao! |
troublesomefox21 chapter 1 . 10/8/2016 Oh my gosh that last guys pick up lines were so bad I was crying. Poor Sasuke. This was really cut thanks for writing it. Super cute. *Arrr |
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 7/22/2016 Those comebacks were amazing and hilarious. Oh, how did you be so funny? |