Reviews for Pick Me Up
Sketchy-d00d chapter 1 . 1/5
Just gotta day, I love Sasuke’s retorts to the flirts. And then Naruto’s utter obliviousness. I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2019
Aghhh I LOVE this!
Rando Chick chapter 1 . 5/18/2019
Sooooo i accidentally came upon this—again. And read it again. And am leaving a comment again because its that amazing. I need more one shots like this lol. 3
lara5170 chapter 1 . 2/6/2019
This was funny but I would like to read a version where everyone is hitting on Naruto instead and Naruto is the one who doesn't want to be there. Like Naruto's appearance with his animalistic appearance turns a bar into ravenous beasts so Jaraiya made a habit of dragging him to all of them so Jaraiya could take advantage of the Naruto effect and get laid while Naruto Sasuke is shocked, amused and upset to learn that in bars others see in Naruto what he does all the time.
Lily chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
That was awesome!
Lily chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
:D
Shadow-Warriour chapter 1 . 4/26/2018
HOLY SHIT I LOVE THIS SO SO SO MUCH
LIKE WOWWWW
ten years later, i find this story
and im so happy i did xD
LONG LIVE SNS
Vivaan chapter 1 . 7/27/2017
Woah... that was pretty.
Ego Centric chapter 1 . 7/13/2017
Darn near choked and laughingly died. That was a wonderful story! Emotional, yet in character and not so angsty as a number of things I've read (Emo Sasuke). Bundles of laughs and a bunch of great lines from Sasuke. Great job showcasing both their general attitudes and some subtle sensitivities.
Mystic-Myth chapter 1 . 4/27/2017
HAHAHAHAHA OH MY GOD YES THE SHOT DOWN LINES ARE HILARIOUSLY
Mystic-Myth chapter 1 . 4/27/2017
yes cuz joining a dangerous organization is a "mid-teen crisis"
bartlettpear chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
I love your retorts to the pick up lines. And the last guy who said not to bring Sasuke there because it was false advertisement. My heart hurt at /“I don’t encourage them,” he finally said softly./ I laughed when Naruto went Arr lol This was formatted the best on your livejournal. Thank you for this cute piece.
animemangaobsessed chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
funny as shit lmfao!
troublesomefox21 chapter 1 . 10/8/2016
Oh my gosh that last guys pick up lines were so bad I was crying. Poor Sasuke. This was really cut thanks for writing it. Super cute. *Arrr
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
Those comebacks were amazing and hilarious. Oh, how did you be so funny?
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