woahhh O.o too much sexiness to handle... XD haha I don't know wat to write... so hmm i'll just say, well done on the awesome fic! - lolz

:D okay, that was really good. how can anyone hate you? this was practically perfect. i loved it a lot!

Ahahahaha. I loved this. Its awesome when you're reading a Nc17 story and the author says something awkward than totally acknowledges it. Puts this whole "fan fiction" thing into perspective. Absoluteness wonderful story.

Craaap... This is so messed up... I shouldn't like this... -.-

THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING! LOVED IT!

It was going good until where you said he just "rammed" into him. Males can't self lubricate and they need preparation such as stretching them open. Maybe you should of had them adding a lubrication spell too because if George did that, Fred would of been in agony. I know most PWP readers wouldn't of cared but it went from being believable to not. It was good but maybe you should read some more slash fics which are thoroughly detailed to make your story that much more believable. All in all, good work :)

sexie

Uh actually, horniness IS a word.

yummy!

I randomly saw this story pulled up on my computer...

I don't know if you know how fucking amazing your story is. I siriusly was shaking by the end, I could barely get to my kitchen I was so dizzy the funny part about it is that. After I read it I had gone to my kitchen to get some water. My boyfriend was sitting there and as I was getting water he gave me a kiss and he told me my eyes were glazed...

Later I find out he put the story on the screen on purpose and had been hard ever since which was five minutes previous to when I read it. I just wanted to let you know that your little story kind of came true and thanks to you I had the most amazing sex I've had in years.

I hope that wasn't a TMI, I'm just thankful. So thank you :)

Oh dear I'm being summoned, thank you again keep writing more.

Holy what the fuck. George on top almost had me die of suprise. It was an awesome fic though X)

what did they create? Man cream? I don't know but i love how you worded this, and honestly? i was just waiting for someone to say something like "Guys! I'm still here!" like if Harry was still in there when they suddenly started to do this.

Woho YES YES and YES I want more more and more. AWESOME!

YAY

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awesome story