I've read this atleast six times till now and I cry each time :'D
This was one of the first fanfics I read and I've read close to 30 others now...
But none can replace this!
This is my all-time favourite and I love this from the bottom of my heart.
If you read this review someday, today is March 30, 2020. Yes, nearly a decade later, I still feel emotional while reading this (especially when young Kai goes back :'D ) Thank you so much for finishing this, You've made my life worth it.
-Sun.

this was amazing I can't put in words how amazing it was actually I really liked it
thank you

You've displayed the dangerousness of Neo Borg boys well and the bond they share. I was in awe when I read Maxie's outburst and was as perplexed as Bryan was but expected it from him anyway. As he said to Mariam in the anime he'll experience hell for his friends if he have to. When Kai called Dema it seemed like he wasn't scared of death at all, forsooth death was the one which was frightened to death. All the scenes which portrayed the food nature of Tyson were like WOW! Actually he is not like that in the original version but in the English dub hell yeah! He'll definitely scare the daylights out of the shefs for sure. Hilary's character had no important plot but I am not disappointed as it is the same in the anime too. After all she is an ordinary girl who doesn't even know how to Beyblade. The young Kai's mischievous deeds are hilarious when Tala and Bryan are off. Every character has been given enough scene according to what they are in the anime except for Tyson. The language barrier was created entertainment to a range on another level. One of the most superb docs I have read in a while. I'm glad I got to find this otherwise I would've missed a lot of fun and thrill. I will make sure to soon R&R the story of yours you've mentioned :)

Omg i suddenly felt like i was crying
That was a beautiful story.

This was beyond awesome
I've been reading this fanfic for a while now
It was amazing
Keep up the good work

Tyson's not that stupid! You're just...you know...overdoing it. And you can't struggle off the fact that Tyson's very friendly to Kai. Other than that,I loved your story.

niiiceee!

Thats good I suppose. But you could add a bit beyblade action instead of guns firing all over. But through all, the fic was cool to see. ;-)

Here im giving you some songs,
till dawn- Zayn
2.24k magic- Bruno Mars
of fame- The script
song saved my life- Simple plan
-Skillet
- Justin Biber and Luis Fonsi
now-Ashes to New
perfect-(4 num.)

sorry i got carryed away in the last chapter.

you are insane. How could you kill tala and bryan? Are you nuts?

The best beyblade fanfiction ever. I've read it over and over for like,5 times,but cant get enough of it. Its awesome.

10/10/2014
I love your story and it makes me cry at the end.

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What a wonderful story. You made me cry but in a good way. I love your work .