Awesome story.

Love this and I would read this all over again

EXODIA, OBLITERATE!
no, but seriously, this is amazing. This fanfiction is awesome! I apologize for my Yugioh reference though... XD

amazing.

Good story, but I have a few minor complaints:
Characters often have extra, unnecessary diologue
Abbreviations such as I'll and He'll are never used in favor of I will or He will
Again, excellent plot. Just try to polish the wording a bit more.

well well well, of all the zelda fanfics I have read in the past few weeks: THIS ONE is by far the only one based in the actual real world with a hint of the video games plus harry potter mixed in! very very good LadyZayriah! send an email to me at yahoo with the above username if you want to thank me for the comment

AACK THIS IS SO GOOD SO FAR!

This is great!

Hi there!

I wanted to point out something I noted in the story: in the very last chapter, Link and Zelda talked as if their children would eventually die of old age, but when they first discovered that she was pregnant Link specifically said his blood should be enough to make them immortal, because immortality was a very powerful magic and all that stuff.
Besides this incongruence, there were times somethings didn't make much sense to me in the plot. For example: why was it so important for Zelda to return to her house whereshe was living with a maniac? I wouldn't put myself in this position if I could help it, so why would Link, who was supposedly trying to help, do so? It didn't sit well with me.
In any case I liked your story. Link and Zelda's relationship was very cute and fluffy, and the wizards thing was really cool. Between the two of us, superpowers are awesome.

Best wishes,
A

well I thought that Link will return to a mortal for a second

THE FIERCE DEITY WAS THE MOST OP MASK OF ALL TIME IN MAJORAS MASK! IT IS MY FAVORITE MASK!

Love ur story

Plot twist? I do not know. Hmmmmmmm... *thinking deeply*

This was really good, it got a bit boring around the pregnancy but it got interesting again soon after that.
I don't really know what to say other than that and that of all the stories on this site, I'm glad that I chose this one to listen to (via TextToSpeech on my phone)

The ending felt a bit rushed though

Haven't read it yet, just copying it over to my TTS reader, but I saw a A/N asking for a review that said good job, so here you are:
Good Job writing a 120k word story