Maybe you went far on the *it* word thing on the story... sorry, jsut stating my opnion... but you are a good writer!

Love your story hope you write more soon

Very nice story. I like the writing style, along with the romance, drama and suspense. I also like how you based this off Twilight, another love of mine, so this story was just heaven for me to read. I enjoyed every second of it. There were some points where Duncan and Courtney were a little out of character, but there's nothing too wrong with that. Some OOC every once in a while isn't always a bad thing. And it has to be that way to make the story go on sometimes.

I'm at the edge of my seat wondering what will happen next. I noticed that you haven't updated in a while and, I know it's not my place to ask, but has this story been discontinued or is something wrong? Sorry, it's not my place to wonder. Anyways, fabulous work, I love it and I hope to read another chapter, whenever it comes out.

Love,

MercyAngel

eh. Its TOO based on twilight. i read twilight. i don't need to read it again.

P.S: Hehe, the name of the hotel for the prom is kinda funny. You see, Charlatan (Charlatán) in Spanish means "talkative", "indiscreet", "boaster" or "trickster", depends of the use

What a shame you haven't updated this story, you left a perfect cliffhanger! And Courtney's dilemma about the mature dreams is described so vividly... Wow, I hope you change this fic to M-rate, so we can have smexy moments (Mwahahaha)

I wonder if Duncan's suddenly question about Courtney's virginity was because he heard her moaning, panting and doing all the show while she was sleeping, and he probably thinks another guy starred her dreams. Please, please, I know it's been almost a year since you updated this story, but please continue soon!

Is it my idea or Trent's more in the "bad boy mood" than Duncan himself? O_OU. Don't complain about it, though, I love both of them, is just an original touch. Let's keep reading and reviewing

First of all, congratulations: You've grown up as a writer and your narrative skills are more mature since "Life for Rent". I'm glad you broke the "Justin popular" stereotype without excluding his good lookings: We've seen his true self in TDA, somebody like him can't be that popular even with his appeal. I'm curious about the things Trent, Geoff and Duncan do. How bad are they? And just one little comment: Aren't Bridgette's eyes greenish/amber, not blue?. Well, let's keep reading this great fic

just wondering if u culd make a character named Jacklynn she culd look like wat evr u want i just want to know if u can

This story is sweet! I love TDI and Twilight so much, this rocks! I like how you write Duncan and Courtney in this story, they're themselves yet unique. But, please, try to add in your original ideas and not totally copy Twilight, that's all the advice I can hand out because besides that, this is awesome!

I hope you can give Geoff and Bridgette bigger roles though. They're my faves and all, but anyways, I noticed that you haven't updated in like forever! Why? I hope everything is okay with you and I hope you can continue this awesome story soon! I love it, update soon! :D

Hehehehehehe, update! Update! Update! Or I swear on a stack of Twilight books I will hunt you down and force-feed you lemon sauce until you do.

xDD "You kids and your baggy clothing" PP Loved that.

Courtney's hair isn't red. _ "Courtney couldn’t help but suspect she was a man, even if there was a mop of long curly red hair at the nape of her neck, pulled into a tight ponytail." And it's not curly. o.O

I actually thought the fear was good in that chappy. Please please please update this fic! it's been over 3 months! Honestly, there are next to no good TDI fanfics on this site, so when i find one i get extremely attached and extremely existed and extremely pissed off when people think their writing sucks and i would kill to write like that and when people don't update _ so i am prepared to bug you and bug you and bug you until you update. :) you have been warned...

*~RandomPersonOfDoom~*

p.s. sorry for the crapy review. _

OMG great story, really love it. Anywho, DID YOU LIKE DIE OR SOMETHING CAUSE YOU HAVEN"T UPDATED IN SO LONG. PLZ UPDATE