Type your review here.i love ur work it's the best i ever had

Type your review here.i love this nice work

Type your review , i like it

love this story, please update

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS COOL STORY!

You know, at first I thought a crossover like this could never, ever work. But I was wrong, so wrong; this has got to be one of the most well-written crossovers I've seen, hands down; the transition for the Dragoons from saviors to overlords is smooth, and, horrifyingly, completely believable. My inner child/LoD fangirl is screaming for the Dragoons to...well, not die in the end, but at the same time, I want Kratos and Miranda to take them down, and to cause that sort of conflict in me, as a reader (and an elitist, canon Nazi bitch at that) is something really special to me.

In short, go you. One of my favorite stories on the site.

Very good chapter, it was a very quick read. poor kid :-( poor Wink...wtf is Dart's deal?

your story is very interesting and i am mesmerized in waiting to see how things pan out! Update soon!

you suck cuz you don't update anymore!

i'm going to nag you until you do, got it!

update soon. :)

thats an awesome story

well sir i was pleasently surprised. i din't exactly know how you were going to make kratos be in lod world..but he is totally awsome...i love dart! he is such a jerk...keep up the good work...why am I not in the fic...of that i am disappointed...i mean even if i died within a few min of being introduced that is all i ask

honestly, this was my favorite chapter, thus far. i like how you keep kratos in character! until chapter 4! :)

This is great man. I think I might be stopping by regularly to check for updates on this one. Good job.

You've really got something good going here. I personally love GOW and i think you've got his character correct. The only thing I don't understand is why the dragoons turned bad. I mean, you've upturned everyone's character. If you're gonna explain it later in the story, then what you've got is fine, but it's really lacking in that area. It just needs explanation of how they turned from saving the world, to ruling it with an iron fist. When you get that done, this story could turn out to be pretty good. Don't give up on it though. Maybe explain why they changed in the next couple of chapters. IMHO though, Kratos would pawn them all. Anyways, good luck!

It was very very good, only thing I have to say is indent ur paragraphs a little more cuz it's a little easier to read, but if u don't want to it's realli good anyways! :-)