In my opinion, this needs to be enlarged upon. It sounds like a very good beginning for an interesting story.

Absolutely adored his mental tirade as he drank. The entire story was great. My favorite part was that he saw two of her. That completely cracked me up. That admission at the end was pretty hilarious, too. I enjoyed reading this one.

Ahhh ! I loved this! I am so glad to finally read your work. I'm sorry I didn't know about FF when you were still writing but let me tell you that you are an awesome story teller and if you ever start writing again you have one more follower in me!
Love drunk Booth. He's so damn cute.

"I try to drink myself into a stupor so I can forget about her, and I get the full Temperance Brennan multimedia experience."

Hah, liked that! As the expression with the only guest at your own pity party.

Bahahaha! Cute take on Booth's POV ... for some reason my LOL moment was "It's a good thing I don't know where they are, since I have a strong urge to stick something sharp in my eye. Repeatedly." which probably says more about me than anything else. :D Really enjoying your stories! Cheers, 2BB

Booth drunk...and moping...and somehow you've made it hilarious! Great work!

LMAO I loved that. It was very humorous! great job

Haha, very cute.

I loved it so much! It was great! I almost die of laugh becouse of the Temperance multimedia experience! It was so funny and tender! Couldnt you writte another chapter? Please, please, please!

While I am waiting...waiting...waiting...*drumming fingers on desktop*...for something new from you, I am continuing my journey through the rest of your fics. I have been avoiding reading this one(fluff bunny remember)since the summarey says that Brennan was going away with a boyfriend *sticks finger down throat & gags*...but I have a glass of wine to fortify myself...& I feel ready to read a fic with Brennan & a boyfriend (who is not named Booth...Seeley Booth, that is)...well maybe 'ready' is not the correct word...but maybe 'buzzed enough'. LOL. I feel like I am sitting right beside Booth at the bar & drowning his sorrows with him. :-)

I love fics from Booth's POV... & this is no different.

Before I had even finished reading the first paragraph, my heart was already breaking for Booth. :-(

Loved his admission to his 'feeling' way back at the firing range.

**It's gotten to the point that if one of us doesn't answer our phone, whoever's calling tries the other one of us. Automatically. It's like we're joined at the hip - without actually being joined at the hip, to my great disappointment.

...love how accepted & obvious it is of how close they are.

Loved Booth's insight into Brennan's character...gooey centre & all. Not many people are priveleged enough to get to see that side of her.

**Like a vitamin, Bones is good for my bones...damn, maybe I should knock off the beer for a while. That was really lame.

...PMSL..

**And now I’m hearing things. Great – I try to drink myself into a stupor so I can forget about her, and I get the full Temperance Brennan multimedia experience. Jesus, I can even see her now. Actually, I can see two of her. Even better – I can barely manage to be around one of her, and now I’m getting her in stereo.

...LMAO...I am loving Booth & his pink elephant thoughts...almost enough to forget that Brennan was planning on leaving with whats-his-name. - almost.

** God couldn’t possibly be this mean – what’d I ever do to Him? I’d get up and run, but I’m not sure I can even walk at this point. Maybe I can just hide under the table…no, if I’m that close to her knees I might start begging.

**“Your car keys.”

It’s a good thing I don’t know where they are, since I have a strong urge to stick something sharp in my eye. Repeatedly. ‘Cause I gotta tell you, this day couldn’t get much worse.

**“Okay, stand up, c’mon, Booth. They’re probably in your pocket.”

Wow. I’m actually standing…oh boy. When did the walls start to move? What the – what the hell! She’s got her hands in my pockets! This is not good, not good, but wow, it feels really good…and now my humiliation is complete.

...OMG...this was absolutely perfect...you/Booth had me snorting all the way through...not a pleasant sight when one is drinking a glass of wine! :-)

**“Bed, yeah, that’s where I wanna be…are you gonna be there too? ‘Cause that would be so cool. I’ve been wantin’ to get you there for forever.

...and now I have forgotten all about whats-his-name!

Loved it...so happy that I had thast first glass of wine...a bit of dutch courage never goes astray...otherwise I probably wouldn't have read it...& I would have missed out on a good laugh...thank goodness it wasnt quite what I was expecting.:-):-):-)

I enjoyed this it's cute and sweet!

Ha, this is fab. Love Booth's meandering thoughts and random admissions :)

that was awesome booths hilarious when he dronks "pink elephants?"

He is SO drunk I Love it

haha i liked it very cute, are you going to contuine tho x