Perfection! I wish there were more stories like this where Optimus interacted with Lennox and Epps. It was also funny seeing those little grease-monkeys scurrying around to escape the 'alien monster.'

this was cute but a cute title would of been house hunters of the show...no judgement

LOL!

This story was FUN!

Keep up the good work.

Hahaha, this has been fun, love it!

I can totally see that happening...LOL

Ah, this story was fun! The interaction between the characters was really nicely done and you write description, dialogue and humor all equally excellently. I really enjoyed reading it!

wow - i laughed so much, this fic is hillarious :)) please write more of this ? or other fics like that ? :)

keep up the great work ..

*hugs*, bye, Blackie ..

That was funny. Great job!

Nice! It's not that often we get to see some interaction between Optimus, Lennox and Epps, but you did a wonderful job with them, making it both realistic and enjoyable. I couldn't stop laughing at the whole scene where Optimus deals with the chop shoppers and with Kane. He is *that* awesome. Especially with the chop choppers' frantic cries as soon as they realize who or what Optimus was. There were some lines that really made my day after reading them.

/Mentally, Will prayed that Optimus Prime wouldn’t take too much offense to being referred to like that and that it wouldn’t influence the Autobot’s stance on Earth to Cybertron relations. He wouldn’t have known where to begin explaining to the President why he suddenly had a war on his hands if the Autobot did./

/First, these guys insulted an extraterrestrial friend of his and now they threatened to dismember a god among sports cars – it made Will disgusted./

/Lennox tackled the man, pulling a disarming move that had Hank crying out for his mommy faster than he could drop his weapon./

/“It’s one of those aliens! It’s going to suck out our brains and anal probe us!”

“Every man for himself – run for your lives!”

“It’s going to turn us into its slaves!”/

/“Please, don’t anal probe me like you were those other guys. I was only kidding around about disassembling ya, honest, Mr. Giant Robot, sir,” the man still in Lennox’s unwavering hold squeaked hysterically. “Do you enjoy car washes? I know a guy in town who owns a joint that can give you a great discount.”

None of them looked very thrilled with the attempt at bribery. At the very least he could have offered something for free instead of a measly discount./

/“And I do understand the meaning of the word ‘no’.”

“Yeah, we know that, but this guy didn’t,” Lennox confirmed,/

/Wordlessly, Robert Epps and William Lennox turned from looking up at their 28 foot friend to the 5 foot, suddenly very sweaty man nervously readjusting his tie as he considered his next words wisely. He flustered a bit, looking to want to argue the point, but not having the balls to spare risking his position by telling the leader of an alien race that he was wrong./

/“I liked Simmons better; it was easier to get him riled up, and at least his sarcasm was sub-par,” Robert noted absently over his coffee, “even if he was an annoying spaz.”/

This was just too much fun to read. Great job!

Nice. By the way: the one person in the book version of the next movie that could argue with Optimus and not be intimtaded: Sam Witwicky. At one point Optimus asks for his help and Sam doesn't want to as he wants a normal life as much as possible and as the book points out, unlike nearly everyone he can argue with Optimus without being intimidated and doesn't even REALIZE that fact.

Interesting! I like how you protrayed Optimus! Very nice! :)

I really enjoyed reading this; Lennox and Epp's interaction was SPOT ON and Optimus was hilarious in his understated way. LOVED it. Thank you.

This was very, VERY good! You have a great writing style.

“I liked Simmons better; it was easier to get him riled up." *snigger* That he is...

Great fic! Don't really know what more to say... Optimus is awesome.

Heheh. Nice little "what if" here, though the ending would have more of a punch if you just stopped one sentence earlier.