I don't like the strange voice

that was a freaky dream she had.
since Flametail apologized maybe she'll be nicer to dark kit

i like sky feather

Wait... Did spiritstorm had Echokit killed? I thought she turned out good! I'm utterly confused now...

whats BADSIDE that isn't a word I AM THE GRAMMAR POLICE

first she is sympathetic, and then shes evil. these changes are so rando!

another tottlly random change in another of the characters.

random change!

I loved the story, but...WHY THAT ENDING?! Why did she have to go to the Dark Forest for her after life?! At least if she had gone to StarClan she would have been happy. Now she can't be with anyone she loves when they die. I literally cried when it ended like that. But that just makes you a wonderful writer. A writer who can make people cry because of the surprise and emotion. I would pay for you to write more warriors fanfics. You have a wonderful talent. And even though you may never read this review, let me tell you something:That was truly a beautiful story. God bless- Silverwind

Nuu. Bad ending. Bad.

Uh, in this story WindClan isn't here right?

You put an ! Instead of a .! Don't worry, I do that all the time.

This is a good story, that is true, but you cannot end the story this way. This isn't opinion. In the beginning you mentioned that 'Darkkit' had powers, and you didn't make it obvious at all even when she was sucked into the Dark , you cannot come to conclusions so quickly about Nightsong's change of view for her mothers. After all, didn't she hate Spiritstar?

Yes! Somebody else who doesn't normally write happy endings! Ha, my stories will probably end in the death of the main charries. And in one of them, the world will end and everyone will die. So much for happy endings!

Oh no! Flametail cast poor darkkit out of her family! How and why did darkkit kill her sister?

How will she survive out the wildernes by herself?