I liked this story a lot actually. The ending's leaving me mixed though. I didn't expect it. Still, good job!

THIS STORY IS FRICKEN EVIL! I LOVE IT!
Honestly that ending killed me so much but it was soo good at the same time!
Damn Roxas' dad. P
Axel should've just taken Roxas to his house...

Dudeeee, dudeee! Not cool, not cool at all!
Why did you do that? I'm almost in tears, fuck!
And my chest freaking hurts, and not cool dude! I'm serioous!
Aghhh, I hate this, really I do!

*sigh*

Beautiful story, but the end...
Fuck, we know it since the beggining but even so, damn!
You're awesome, but I don't know what to feel anymoreee!

(thanks btw)

Hey. *pats you on the shoulder* Hey, you. Yeah, you. *points to author*. C'mere. Closer. Okay, maybe just a bit close- Ah, perfect. I have something to say to you. *crouches down and puts my lips to one of your ears and whispers*...fuk u...

This is really beautiful. I mean it with all my heart and i read this about ten times already and this still beautiful.

;( I have no words to display how sad I am right now but the story is beautiful , fuck , I'm in tears

You know when you read something, and it's so beautifully written that it touches something deep inside of you and makes you rethink basically your entire life?

Yeah.

Wow. W O W. You suck. This sucks. I just. I'm crying and it's terrible because this is one of the best things and I just. God. I can't. I want to thank you, but at the same time I'm just blown away and it just hurts so much and I'm just gonna go cry some more now. Basically, thank you for writing this.

I can't breathe. It's like I was waiting for some miracle, holding my breath until the happy ending...
This. This was beautiful. Is beautiful. Breathtakingly so, apparently. We have the lies, the imperfection, the love, the tragedy, and an eztra dash of crossdressing: all the ingredients for one of my favorite stories. All mixes up in superb writing, of course. Thank you for writinf this. It may have broken my heart, but I'm thankful for it.

I'm surprised I haven't favorited this sooner. I have a tendency to absolutely love angsty pieces like this, and I'm pretty sure this is about the seventh time I've read this - finding it through or LiveJournal. Great piece, love it. Sincerely heart wrenching.

I'd say something intelligent and eloquent but...

My heart is caught in my throat and there are no words.

oh my god...that was so tragic. I as utterly enthralled with your story the whole time, it was brilliantly written, witty, romantic, and the most depressing thing I have ever read. You have pretty much just cemented Axel and Roxas as a couple in my mind now forever. Utterly amazing, you are a wonderful author, please don't stop writing, the world would lose an amazing talent if you did.

whuh, now this was really beautiful, sad and purely inspirational in an angsty sorta way. Q3Q I love it. well done.

That was really sweet and stuff. There was the right amount of cynicism tied with the deep moments and Axel was a really compelling character. Teared up a little. At the end I couldn't stop thinking about his step-sister. There's some great writing in between the plot here. Thanks for sharing.

amazing! simply an amazing story!