I really like how you move between the rambling thoughts and the actual scene... Hope that you choose to continue this soon! :)

Ohhh, what a wonderful bitsie! I love how you deal with Qui's presentation here, and I'm so glad he can overcome his "monster". Great writing! Thanks!

Ohh, what a lovely chapter, and it's so like Obi to put himself last. :) Such angst - wonderful! :)

this one is quite confusing...but then their delirious and injured so i guess thats kind of the point right? only i'm not sure i get where u were going with this...why is it called persistance to blame?

This was good. I am in awe once again. I wish I wrote this well for my favorite Jedi! Wonderful story and I hope you continue it!

~charliebrown1234

Really really great story! So happy to see a new story by you, as well! Wonderful display of emotion and angst. Please write more soon! :D

Is there gonna be another chapter? I really hope so..

So wonderful, so touching. I'm speachless.

Ooh, intense! But still good.

Great chapter! I am very interested to find out how things go once Obi awakens. I'm glad Qui-Gon has seen the proverbial light, and I hope that he rethinks his uncharitable thoughts about Obi's level-headedness (as though that's a bad quality for a Jedi) and supposed lack of emotion.

It's ironic that Qui-Gon has been drowning in his own emotions (mainly grief) for so long, that he is the one who is needing to relearn the lesson of letting go and keeping calm that his young padawan embodies. Um, who's the master in this relationship again?

Thank you for updating this story! After a long drought, it seems we're getting more stories again about young, pre-TPM Obi-Wan. That makes me happy! (A benefit to these stories, of course, is the fact that there's no Anakin Skywalker in sight.) Thank you for your contribution to that resurgence!

Yay. Obi and Quiggy both alive. Now, let's see if Jinn can actually help his padawan, and apologize for his awful words and thoughts. Next chappi? *prods* Yes, chappie you want to do...chappie you want to do...chappie you want to...DO IT! Please? *LOL* Ani

You updated! This chapter though, wow. You convey so much meaning with just a few words. I can't wait to read more and see Qui and Obi's reaction to recovery. Thanks for sharing the story! :)

The pain, the fever, past memories and sick dreams. A fantastic combination.

Awesome job! The drama was so deep, and the emotions very well-done.

Oh, beautiful! You really manage to get into Qui-Gon's head.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)