its was good but the ending was shit come on really
and yes my really name is hood

I loved it. I just think it should have been longer.

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This story is really, really good. I loved it from first chapter to the last. 3

AWESOME! Ur an awesome writer keep up the good work.

i really like it ! xxxxx

Spectacular! I absolutely loved it.

Lol. Cute, I like it!

It was pretty awesome, kinda cheesy and cliche but who doesn't like that once in a while?

Of course, I'm just an oddball so don't go by me. I'm listening to '80s rock music right now instead of the norm. Lol.

Anyway, I think it was really well-written, even if there were a couple of typos.

Is there a sequel coming up in the near future? *looks hopeful* Yes, no, maybe?

I loved this story! i love ur writing style! the only i was sad about was when it ended! D: well i just wanted to compliment ur writing its amazing!

she fainted ! LMAO ! i am laughing really hard now just imagining it xD

Loved it! Hope u write another story about Embry, He's my favorite! _

hahahahahaaha lmfao she fainted!

Haha LOVE LOVE LOVED IT! Embry and Evey forever haha.. If you ever find the time, could you please check out my story Holy Imprint!: Seth ? I would love to have your input in it!

Keep writing n rockin..

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i liked this, it's the first time i read one of these and it's good...just one question, does evelyn have some kind of sleep disorder? and what kind of pills is she taking? it sounded rather weird, her taking some pills and then being unconscious for a day...might be a good idea to change that or explain it...otherwise, good

the only thing i didnt like was the swearing and call each other babe!i loved everthing about this else, the story was interesting and the charteres were not ooc - which most people make them so thank you. i like how you started with random feelings which then conect to the next part of the story!